That was a good ending to this story. I really enjoyed this whole story, and I can't wait to read whatever else you write. As always, keep up the brilliance! :)Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'll be posting a new novella that i'm writing after Christmas and exams ! But you can be sure to find a one shot from me every once and a while! Report Review
Now that was shocking stuff! I loved the part with Ron and Draco shouting "NOT MY GIRLFRIEND-" "-YOU BITCH!" That was too cute! That was an amazing chapter, and I can't wait to read more! :DAuthor's Response: Thanks! the next chapter is the last one, and to be honest, it's quite short.
i'm glad you liked it! Thank you for all your reviews! Report Review
No, not a cliff hanger! I don't hate you, though, I'm just anxious to see what happens! Please update quickly! I have to know! :DAuthor's Response: oh, i sure thought it was.. oh well. i just sent in the next chapter! the queue is 2 days so soon! :) Report Review
Amazing chapter! I can't wait to see how it turns out. Please update soon! :DAuthor's Response: thanks! i will! :) Report Review
Woah! I'm so mad at Draco for doing that to Nicole! But at least he's sorry, and he really loves her. I'm anxious to read the next chapter! :DAuthor's Response: I knew it would be a shocker! :) Next chapters are intense :) js! Report Review
That was a good chapter. Personally, I don't think it was Draco, he's too sweet to do anything like that. Or I hope so, anyways. Can't wait for the next chapter! :DAuthor's Response: thanks! this one was a hard chapter to write :/ but the next few were easy! i have the full story written and i'm quite happy with it!
if you see this, you should go read and review If I Die Young, id love to see what you think! :) Report Review
Wow, that was really intense! I really want to know who did that! At first I thought it might be Draco. Exellent, as usual, I can't wait for the next chapter! :DAuthor's Response: thanks! i sent in the next chapter an hour ago and the queue is currently 5 days so should be soonish haha. you'll be quite surprised with the next one in sure! Report Review
Thanks so much for the shout out in your A/N and the dedication. I really like this story, and I'm sorry about your one-shot. This chapter was really good, although, I did miss Draco, but that's okay, it was excellent anyways! :)
Can't wait for the next chapter, keep up the brilliant excellence! :DAuthor's Response: Anytime, really :) the one shot (called if i die young) should be up in the next few days and i'm really excited to see what people think :). Draco will for sure be in the next few chapters so stay tuned!
thank you so much for the reviews!
This chapter was cute! I was so happy that Draco and Nicole finally stopped playing with their lives and kissed. But I do feel bad for Nicole, that she feels so alone. Can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the wonderfulness! :)Author's Response: Thanks! :) I can't wait for your next review lol! Report Review
That was good. I felt bad for Nicole that no one came to see her, I at least thought Draco would. Keep up the brilliant spectacularness! :)Author's Response: To tell you the truth, there is a reason Draco didn't go see her, it will all be revealed later! :) Report Review
Wow, this was a good chapter,it was very interesting with all the blood and cuts. Keep up the brilliance,can't wait for the next chapter! :)Author's Response: Thanks so much, you're beginning to be my favourite reviewer ! Next chapter will be up soon! (: Report Review
Haha, this was the funniest chapter yet. Nicole's ranting was so funny! Keep up the spectacularness! :DAuthor's Response: i love how you reviewed almost all the chapters! thanks! :) Report Review
That chapter was hilarious! And that's a good way to get rid of hiccups, I'll have to try that. :)Author's Response: thanks, i try to put things that have happened to me into my work and thats how my best friend got rid of my hiccups! (he's a boy, i'm a girl.. just clearing that up) Report Review
Hehe, Draco got turned into a ferret. As much as I love him, he's a nice ferret for sure. Story is still spectacular! :)Author's Response: :) i love hearing all this feedback! Report Review
Aww, what Draco said was so cute! This story is spectacular! :)Author's Response: thanks! :) Report Review
I just re-discovered your stories. Draoc needs to kiss her!Author's Response: haha, thanks he will at some point, you just wait :) Report Review
PLEASE WRITE MORE CHAPTERS!Author's Response: I am ! :) Report Review
I love how it's in both of their points of views!! You're doing an awesome job. It's only the 2nd chapter and I'm in love with it already!! Keep writing (:Author's Response: thanks! I always love reading books in different points of views so i tried it here :) , glad you like it! chapters may come in slow for a bit but i am still working!
-gryffindork95 Report Review
Good first chapter im intrested :) up date soonAuthor's Response: thanks!
i sent in the second chapter today so it should be up soon :) Report Review
Interesting idea for a story. It's very good :)
Can't wait for more :D
-slyhterinprincess22Author's Response: Thanks!
I posted the second chapter today, cant wait to see what others think about it! Report Review
Somehow I find it hard to beleive that anyone could (except another Slytherian) fall in love (never mind have a crush) with Draco. A good start to your story. 9/10 and please update soon.Author's Response: thank you for the review!
It may not seem believable yet, but just wait. It will all tie together in the end. :) Report Review
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