Love Mumford and Sons, and the song, though I would've never thought of it for Snape/Lily - but you've made it work perfectly! Very sad and very good little one shot songfic :) Loved it!Author's Response: Ah, thank you so much! I think it fits him well, I dunno. :) I'm so glad you liked it! Report Review
Firstly, great song choice! Little Lion Man = definitely one of my favourites. You used the lyrics brilliantly too. I love Snape/Lily and you wrote them really well - I especially liked when Lily was constantly thinking 'Mudblood' but wasn't willing to say it out loud, it really showed how much it had hurt her. Severus was wonderful too - hurt, awkward, even a little bit vulnerable, but he still felt true to canon. When he hurt, he wanted the world to burn. He'd burned her. - ohhh that line just killed me! Poor Sev :( Love it though, brilliant work!Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much! I'm so glad that came through - I wasn't sure if the Mudblood was too much!
Hooray! This entire review made me smile so much, thank you! I'm so, so glad you enjoyed it, and thank you a million times over!
-Jasmine Report Review
Very good! Looking forward to reading more from you!Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much! I'm glad and so grateful! (: Report Review
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