omg I like this story a lot so far please continue. Report Review
Way to make it awkward with a cliff hanger! haha :D this story is really good so far! I cant wait to see the history behind Chloe and James! But I have one suggestion...it's quite serious. WRITE MORE!!! (: hahaha well this was awesome bottom line! (: Report Review
ahh that was an awesome ending for the chapter!! please update i HAVE to know why james did that!Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! Thank you for taking time to read and review,I appreciate it.I'm sooo sorry for not updating, but life is crazy! I'll try harder, promise!
Thanks again,Vicky :) Report Review
Great start, it seems really interesting so far... a few grammar/ spelling mistakes though. (:
~KhanhAuthor's Response: Thank you for reading it and for your good words! I should have probably mentioned it at an author's note,as I did for my other story, but english isn't my mother tongue and mistakes should be expected!Please, next time go ahead and correct, that would please me very much!
thank you again, Vicky :) Report Review
Amazingness! My friend told me to read this and it's amazing. I love it. I will definitely read more in the futureAuthor's Response: Thank you so much!I love your friend and you for listening to him/her!I do that with my friends too for the stories I like and I'm so happy someone liked mine enough to do the same!
Thanks for your time and so sorry for not updating!
vicky :) Report Review
Why why why did you end it here?! Such a cliffie, ugh, you horrible woman! This totally means that you need to update ASAP, ok?Author's Response: Haha I love your comment, so alive! thank you for your good words and sooo sorry for not updating yet!I've been really busy and I can't seem to like anything that I write..so sorry about tahat BUT I'll try to update soon-ish..Thank you again! :) Report Review
Wow, that's very awkward.Author's Response: Yeap,that's exactly what I think,too.
Thanks for the review! =)
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This is really good, this is gonna sound strange, but please R&R mine.Author's Response: thank you ! :) Report Review
Well,the end of the chapter WAS awkward.Diavasa se ena review pou eixes kanei oti eisai apo ellada...elpizw na eisai k' na katalavaineis ta greeklish pou grafw...tespa,polu wraia istoria!!!elpizw oti o james kai h chloe na ta ftiaxoun sto telos...filakia!!!Author's Response: It was supposed to be awkward,yes.Nai eimai apo ellada kai profanws katalabainw ti les. :) basika eixa dei ta comments soy sthn allh istoria kai eipa "wow,ellhnes". xarhka poly poy soy arese h istoria! oso gia ton james kai thn chloe mallon 8a prepei na diabaseis thn upoloiph istoria(otan thn grapsw!:P).
se euxaristw polu pou diabases kai poy ekanes review! filia!
vicky :) Report Review
Wow. That was an amazing start.
Hope you update soon :)Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to review and I'm glad you liked it!I'll try updating soon.Thanks again. :)
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I loved this loads and loads! I'm thinking it has lots of potential. I must admit, once I saw you had Laura Marling on your banner, I had to check it out. I was glad I did though :D
~IzzyAuthor's Response: I'm so happy you liked it! yay! Laura Marling was my friend's who made the banner inspiration and I qiute like her too. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)
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haha, I like it already, I've got a feeling this story is going to be right up my street :D i hope you find the time to update soon!Author's Response: I'm happy you liked it! I'll try updating soon-ish. haha .Thanks for the review! :) Report Review
I really loved the ending "well, this is awkward" :D update soon :)Author's Response: I thought the ending was suited, don't you think? I'm glad you liked and I try updating as soon as I can. thanks for reading and reviewing! :) Report Review
The more I read it, the more I love it.
Great first chapter dearest Sid, I loved Chloe and the ending. More JAMES!
Please write more soon,
Nancy!! Author's Response: Oh thank you so much darling Nancy!You're always so sweet!I'm glad you loved Chloe and it's a James/OC story, so there's going to be more James, no wories!
I'll try to update soon! :)
Love,Sid! Report Review
I like Chloe, she seems really interesting.
And what the hell was that with James?
This was a good introduction to your story, and I can't wait for the next chapter! 10/10
-Mariah.Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it. The characters are loosely based on me and my best friend ( Chloe&Leah), so it's a great thing you found her interesting!
As for James, I don't know, I just felt like it! haha
As for the next chapter I'm still trying to figure out what's going to happen after James left.
Thanks for the review! :P Report Review
Well,girl I loved it!I'm really expecting your secont chapter!Well done sweety!!!:PAuthor's Response: Oh well thank you! I'm happy you liked it and I'll try to post the second chapter as soon as possible. :) thanks! Report Review
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