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6 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Sophia Montgomery Faith

5th January 2006:
You should try to use some more capitalization and space out inbetween quotes. A beta might also be helpful. I like how Harry 'hugged Hermione like it would be her last'.

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Review #2, by jman detetion\'s stroll

20th March 2004:
i LIKE it but it's kinda short and confusing to read cause everywhere ther's supposed to be a comma, it a slash thing this /

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Review #3, by evilsushi Faith

17th August 2003:
i think its good, just its a little confusing. i had some trouble with all the POV\'s and you shoudl space your paragraphs a bit. just some helpful critisim . keep writing!

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Review #4, by AdriaTonks Faith

17th August 2003:
Great story! Go hermoine and Draco! Keep writing, it\'s a good story!

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Review #5, by ILUVDRACO Faith

15th August 2003:
update soon

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Review #6, by lAsYgAl*^_^* Faith

15th August 2003:
update soon... keep trying... its gettin along great!

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