Love it! I'm in love with Draco/Hermione pairing

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very lovely.

this was a very enjoyable one-shot. i liked the little intrusions and the situation with Ron made this all the more wonderful. great job and great story. keep up the incredible writing! (:

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Yeah, it may be cheesy and maybe a bit unrealistic with how she says she loves him so soon, but it's really cute and I know that was probably your aim. My only objection would be the way Ron is kind of an ass, but I guess you needed that for the plot. True to its name, a sweet one-shot. I particularly like how she and not the war changed him. Nice job :)

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I thought you captured Draco and Hermione's characters really well in the beginning. I did think they went out of character a bit, but I suppose they kind of have to for Draco/Hermione to work. Your dialogue was really good and true-to-character as well. Although I understand it is a one-shot so things do have to move rather quickly, the epiphany did occur rather quickly. From the title, I thought you were going to focus on the epiphany part of it, rather than the romance. I also really like how you used little snippets of time to tell the story. Oh, and that you used the quote for the challenge in the middle of the story, rather than at the end. Good job!

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Aww :)
this is so sweet...
Incredibly ooc, but agonizingly sweet :D
loved it!!
9/10
d/hr ftw! :D

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this was cute :) i liked it! I'm not normally one for mush but i liked this

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AW!!! I like mushy :) Its so cute that they had fallen in love with each other from afar. *sigh*. Anyway. Love it :)
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P.S- You deserve all the sweetees in the world for this :D 11/10 XD

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