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Review #1, by Schiffty A Book, A Firecracker, and An Interesting Dance

22nd June 2011:
I liked the interaction with Michael Corner, a reminder of her mum's past that is rather important. I really enjoy your writing and the increasing confusion for Julia. This is going on my favorites, 10/10 can't wait for the next one

Author's Response: Aw thanks so much, Schiffty, that's really nice of you to say :) I really hope you enjoy the rest of the story!

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Review #2, by Schiffty Arrival at Malfoy Manor

22nd June 2011:
This one seems interesting.I like it. It's different. On to chapter two!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading!!

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Review #3, by FlaviaMalfoy Arrival at Malfoy Manor

22nd June 2011:
To get to the song: Google A Cauldron Full Of Hot, Strong Love Harry Potter, and click on the first link that is from harrypotter. wikia . Then go to near the middle of the page where it says Behind The Scenes and there is a link to the SongMaker and the song A Cauldron Full Of Hot, Strong Love. And listen!

Author's Response: Aha! I am definitely gonna do that... looking it up now :) Thanks for letting me know!

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Review #4, by FlaviaMalfoy A Book, A Firecracker, and An Interesting Dance

22nd June 2011:
Ahh, loving the story so far! I hope you continue on and finish it, I am very intrigued as to what will happen next!
Lovely story, and very original idea/plot. . . I love it! Great detail, there were a few grammatical mistakes but nothing major. Definitely has potential, you are a very talented writer! I do hope Julia and James get together in the future, that would be adorable! A mini-Harry and mini-Cho that get to be together! So cute! I always want to write Cho and Harry or Cho and somebody, but I know she has a vast number of haters. So this is a lovely choice to have future generations and Cho's daughter play out and not be confined to have to write Cho's well-hated character. Poor Cho aha!
Also, I found it really added to the story to listen to this rendition of A Cauldron Full Of Hot, Strong Love ( WON'T LET ME POST A LINK SO I WILL POST ANOTHER REVIEW TELLING HOW TO GET TO IT) while reading the part when Julia and James dance. Actually loved the scene while listening to the song!

Author's Response: You are so sweet for leaving me this huge review!!! I'm so glad you are reading it and I will definitely keep writing :) I know, I decided to write about Cho because so many people seem to hate her! I liked her and Harry together but totally get why he ended up with Ginny. HOWEVER it's kind of fun to imagine that maybe they'd sort of make up after all those years and there's something left...

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Review #5, by NextGenna14 A Book, A Firecracker, and An Interesting Dance

20th June 2011:
Ohhh the plot thickens ;)!!!

Author's Response: Haha, yes indeed! ;)

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Review #6, by NextGenna14 Arrival at Malfoy Manor

19th June 2011:
Wow, this started off great! :D

Author's Response: Thanks, that's so nice of you!! I'm working on the next chapter :) Hope you'll stick around to read it!

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