"What, you want to repeat the experience of kissing me and me pulling away? That's a bit of a weird thing to get off on, Oliver." I smirked as he rolled his eyes.
Like always, you are brilliant. I do have something to confess though. I read "Come on, King Witty, let's go." as "Come on, Kitty Wing, let's go" and got utterly confused. And amused. Would have been funnier if it was Kitty Wing. ;)
And yes, Heather. Cat's are truly the only one real love in one's life. :) Very much agree. People are too silly.
Update son!!! :D
KBDAuthor's Response: Haha!! That's brilliant, Kitty Wing xD I agree completely about cats too, who needs people when they have a furry bundle of kitty love? (Crazy cat lady in the making, me? Never :P) I shall try to update as soon as I can, provided I survive the stress of my horrific exams :/ Really hoping this summer will be productive and fanfic-filled xD Report Review
"I get up and leave every time he comes over. But I make sure not to move until he's seen me, so he's knows it's his fault I can't hang around with my friends at mealtimes anymore," I explained, smirking victoriously. As if Davies actually cared that his mere presence made me want to stab my eyes and ears out.
"I'm sure that really cuts him up inside."
Omg I love this. X) So much amusing up in here!
Hang on a second ... was he moving closer? Oh my god, his face was definitely getting closer to my face. Eek! He wants to kiss me! What the fuck do I do now? Terrified but a tiny bit excited ... but I can't do this!
Oliver's lips were on mine for barely two seconds before I pulled away. Don't look at me like that, I couldn't help it! They were wet and cold and there was spit involved!
"Are you saying I'm not welcome in your shower, Oliver Wood?" I sat up, too, put my hands on my hips and glared at him.
"What? I ... what are you ... we've barely even kissed!"
"Hey! I resent that! Percy is a prude! I'm just ... not used to being asked to ogle a bloke while he's standing half-naked right in front of me, that's all."
"I see. So you prefer to ogle blokes when they're not paying attention, is that it?"
You have too many funny moments in this!! :D PS: this is not me complaining. I'm a fan of ridiculous amounts of funny.
This may just be the sexiest chapter you've written yet, my friend. Thirteen thumbs up for you! :D Fantastic job!
KBDAuthor's Response: Thank you so much!! :D I had that kiss scene written for months, had been dying to finally be able to put it up here! Your lovely reviewing has made me want to get myself out of my exam-stress-bubble and get writing again :D Report Review
Man, I forgot how much I love this story. X) I have barely had enough time to think lately, so I apologize for falling behind in the reading of HPFF stuffzzez (especially this beautiful masterpiece).
Oh Merlin. Roger Davies? How did I not see that one coming *face palm*. That'll sure make for some interesting funnies between him and Mr. Wood! ;)
I need to go read more. Byes! :)
KBDAuthor's Response: OMG I missed you! :D Thank you for reviewing again, totally made my week :D Report Review
Oliver Wood in the movies was so cute! He needed more screen time!
I love this kind of story where a secondary character gets their own plot and there are plenty of OCs and everything is happening in paralel to the books.
From the start I took a liking to Heather Green. She seems like my kind of girl, with crazy girlfriends and an odd sense of humor but very responsible despite it all. I believe the cast of OCs you set up for this story will make for a very interesting read.
I loved how natural the dialogue was between her and Oliver. In some stories the dialogue between the main characters is awkward and somewhat lacking in the beginning, but here, I saw the Heather that was in Heather's head come out of her mouth as well and I just loved that!
The writting flowed nicely, there was enough detail for me to see the actual setting and the bits and pieces of Wood she was noticing. McGonagall was also very in character, which I loved, since she is awesome. The spelling and grammar were flawless and all in all, this was a very good start to a promising story! Good luck!Author's Response: OMG! *blushes* All these lovely compliments ... *blushes some more* Thank you so so much! :) I'm so pleased you like Heather and that you enjoyed the first chapter. Thank you for leaving such a wonderful review (excuse me while I go and deflate my head, haha), and I would love to see what you think of the later chapters :) Report Review
Aww - Heather is softening up (in spite of herself)! Her relationship with Oliver is sweet and funny. Thanks for the update!Author's Response: She is indeed, it's quite shocking xD Thanks so much for the review! :D Report Review
YAY YOU UPDATED!!!
Heather made me so frustrated this chapter. I mean, if Oliver freaking Wood is trying to hold your hand and kiss you, you let it be, no matter how socially awkward you are!!! And Louise is obviously hurt that Heather's blowing them off for Oliver just because she doesn't like Davies. Her friends accepted Oliver; why can't she at least give Davies a chance?
Ugh, Heather. I love you, but you've been acting quite badly lately.
Oliver's such a sweetheart, though. I love how he's very patient with her and her unwillingness to be all couply and when she complains and such; it shows that he really does like her.
Now, for my favorite lines:
"Plus, he's going to break her heart sooner or later and I won't even be able to say 'I told you so' because apparently that's insensitive."
"I forgot your only love in life is your cat."
"I'm amazed your heart fits in your chest without breaking your ribs," Oliver deadpanned.
"I've been thinking – don't laugh, I do do it occasionally!"
Also, thank you for the shout-out and the plug! It was a pleasure reviewing your story. :) Although this update makes me feel like I should update as well...We're in the same boat; writer's block and uni work and such.
Please, please update soon! And if you could sneak in their first (real) kiss in the next chapter, that'd be extra awesome. :)Author's Response: Hahaha I know, right? She's such a weirdo xD Yep, Heather is a pretty rubbish friend a lot of the time, she's lucky her friends don't just abandon her altogether :S Unfortunately, I've reached the age when most of my friends abandon me for boys, so I decided to vent my frustrations a little on the characters of this story (sorry, guys!) in order to temporarily shift the writer's block xD
Anyway, enough of real life (always getting in the way, tut tut) ... yay you gave me favourite parts :DDD And no problem, you deserved the shout-out and plug - and we need more converts to the Percy fan club ;)
Thank you so much for this lovely review, and I shall try to update soon (miraculously I do have almost half of the next chapter written already). And funny you should mention 'first (real) kiss' and 'next chapter' in the same sentence ... not that I'm giving anything away AT ALL ... ;) Report Review
This was a nice chapter, though it really makes me curious when Oliver is going to try and kiss her again... That can't be kept off forever...
It's nice that he's trying to make her comfortable though.
I hope you won't let me wait so long for the next chapter... I really want to know where this is going!
xAuthor's Response: Indeed it cannot ... we shall just have to wait and see ;)
The next chapter is actually almost half written already :D Though when it actually goes up depends upon how long I can keep writer's block at bay, haha :/
Thank you for reviewing! :D Report Review
You should not let us wait to long for the next chapter, that is actually cruel.
Please write a bit more on this story, i'm completely hooked on in now and I don't want to stop reading now.
I want to know if Heather ever get's used to being with Oliver, you know. and in the mean time I want to read about them being weird all the time.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
xAuthor's Response: I'm sorry!!! Life has rather taken over, unfortunately, but the next chapter is finally nearing completion, I promise :)
Thanks for reviewing :D Report Review
Ow this chapter was so lovely!!!
I would say it is guaranteed to raise a smile, since I was smiling almost the entire time I was reading!
Loved it!Author's Response: Awww, thank you :D Your review has raised a smile, too :) Report Review
The more I read, the more I feel kind of related to Heather, even though I am far from being 'rude' like she is, I hardly ever swear and I can only wish for ginger curls. But she has something relateable about her.
I love how this story makes me laugh out loud more than once in a chapter, I like laughing.
I think you're writing pretty nice. It really get's me.
I don't quite understand why Heather runs into Wood everywhere. is he stalking her or what? But it does not matter, I do really like the way they banter about everything, so I alway look forwards to the moment they meat again.
I like this story a lot!
xAuthor's Response: Thank you so much for stopping by to review! And thank you for the lovely compliments :D
Hmm ... Stalker Oliver. It's certainly a possibility :P
Thanks again :D Report Review
It's been a while since I checked for more chapters and I excitedly read through several but when I got here there was a brief 'fuck it' moment. More would be appreciated :)Author's Response: Thank you for returning to GTRAS and reviewing again :D I'm slowly getting there with the next chapter, though my mind is far more inclined to write my Sirius story instead at the moment xD So hopefully there shall be updates for both fairly soon! Report Review
i love it!i just love your plot. seeing you did more up to about 16 other stories, i have some ideas ill tell you later.Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing, I look forward to hearing your ideas :) Report Review
This story does always guarantee that I smile. It is so cute and funny!Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing, I'm so pleased that it does :D Report Review
I like it! Your character are really likable, and your story is interesting. I really love Heather's relationship with her mother. Though I would like to hear more from Charlie - you know about his thoughts on Maxwell, and her relationship with Oliver. ;)
Looking forward to seeing where you take this. =DAuthor's Response: Thank you so much for your review!! I'm glad you like the story and Heather :) Funnily enough, I was just writing a little something from Charlie in the next chapter ;) Report Review
No now I hate to wait for updates! ): ): ):
I don't know what you're talking about, this chapter didn't seem disjointed at all. I loved it. Especially when Heather freaked when Oliver took his shirt off. Hilarious!
Please, please put up the next chapter soon! I'm so in love with this story I think I might get waiting anxiety or something.Author's Response: And I have to wait for another lovely review from you! :(
Why, thank you! :) I don't know what's wrong with her, honestly, not taking full advantage of that view... ;)
Haha I shall try my very best to update soon!!! Report Review
Those two just get cuter and cuter as they go along! I really am in love with this story; I know I say that a lot, but it's true. It's really funny and has just the right amount of fluff without being overbearing, and the plot moves along at a good pace. Not to mention your characterization makes them loveable but not Mary Sue-ish!Author's Response: And I am in love with your reviews! I feel I have not said that enough - the highlight of my day is reading them :D Feeling the motivation to write write write now just so I can have another! xD Thanking you!! :) Report Review
Yay, they're officially together! And Ollie was all nervous asking her, awww. :D
I hope the rumors don't get too nasty about the two of them, but oh well, Oliver can protect her from the masses!
Hearing Heather whine about running is funny. Can't wait to see what state she's in after it's over!
And Oliver wanting to meet Maxwell is cute too. He's taking interest in what Heather likes. :)Author's Response: They are! Who'd have thought that would ever happen?? :P
He would be a fine protector, I'm sure!
Thank you!!! :D Report Review
Aw he stayed with her through the feast!!! What a gentleman. I think I'm in love.
I enjoyed the interrogation scene with her friends as well. Heather's going over to the dark (girly) side, muahaha! I just wish she had let him kiss her goodnight. I bet he'd be a good goodnight kisser.
Your writing is wonderful! :)Author's Response: Ahaha, you're not the only one ;)
Ahh, maybe one day she will. One day xD
Thank you again! Seriously, can't say it enough!! :D Thank you thank you thank you :D Report Review
That has got to be one of the most awkward, weird, and absolutely adorable dates in the history of dates ever. Heather and Oliver are so odd together, yet they fit perfectly! I love how even when they have awkward moments it's so easy for them to just laugh it off because they understand each other so well. And aw, how cute that they lost track of time at The Three Broomsticks! Heather passing out though...haha, to be honest that's probably happen to me if I had to run that far. x)Author's Response: Thank you :D I hope I can keep up the right balance of awkward, weird and adorable in the future! And I have to admit (*bows head in shame*), the passing-out-after-sudden-running thing was very nearly from personal experience (chasing buses, not advisable), though thankfully I stopped running just before I passed out like Heather xD Report Review
ANSNJEFISJWJQOSBZJIDGKE OH MY GOODNESS HEATHER TOKD OLIVER SHE FANCIES HIM AND HE FANCIES HER BACK AND THEY'RE GOING ON A DATE AND I CAN'T LEAVE A PROPER REVIEW BECAUSE I'M FANGIRLING TOO MUCH AND I WANT TO READ THE NEXT CHAPTER ALREADY SO SORRY THIS IS ALL YOU'RE GOING TO GET!Author's Response: Hahahaha I laughed so loudly when I read this on the bus earlier! This is my favourite review ever xD Report Review
Oooh, Heather's just getting mad at Alice because deep down she knows she's right!
I'm starting to love Oliver even more now. He's just such a sweetheart! And I bet he wanted to keep on working on the project so he could spend more time with Heather.
Loved the bit about the twins' prank; it was a brilliant idea. Hehehe I imagined that scene in Transfig in my head and it was so funny.Author's Response: Ahh, you see right through her!! And him, haha ;)
Gotta love those twins! How much fun life would be with those two around :D
Thank you for the review!! Report Review
He thrust his sexiness in her face. He THRUST his SEXINESS in her FACE. HE THRUST HIS SEXINESS IN HER FACE.
I think that might be the most brilliant line I've ever read.
Heather trying to navigate her crush is hilarious. Of course she would try to rationalize it (typical Ravenclaw) and of course she would try to push it away (typical Heather). Too bad Wood's way too sexy for that to happen. ;)Author's Response: Hahaha thank you!!! *is proud*
Hmm, he is that ;) Report Review
The letters between Heather and her mum are brilliant! Like mother, like daughter, I suppose. And AWWW, Ollie stood up for her!!! Pretty soon those rumors are going to become true, you know...or well, not the one about Heather jinxing him. Although you never know. She's kind of a loon.
Love love love this story, as if I haven't told you before!Author's Response: First things first - in response to your response to my last review of TSAP: ":O ?!?!?!" Since I can't review it twice, I shall let you know now that I need more, despite your terrifying warning!!! xD
Secondly ... thank you for this review! It really does make my day reading your reviews! Hahaha, indeed, you never know what she might do next xD Report Review
Oliver. Offered. To. Walk. Her. To. Class. KDJEKWHRJTNDKWHRNCLWKQUQJSJDLAL!
I've officiallt decided Alice is my favorite of Heather's friends. She so totally wants Heathiver to happen as much as I do.
And I love how you included Charlie in here. I've always wanted to learn more about him. Yay for minor characters!
Again, I forgive your dig on my Percy-Wercy. He happens to be my favorite Weasley, thank you very much.
Loved this, as per usual!Author's Response: Ahaha, Heathiver? Love it! And I think Alice would appreciate it too xD
You have actually just reminded me that I need some more Charlie in this story, he has been neglected lately :(
Thank you for all of your reviews, they keep me smiling! :D Can't wait to see what you think of the next few chapters :) Report Review
HAHAHAHAHAHA HEATHER'S EYE VIRGINITY WAS TAKEN AWAY.
AND OHMAHGAHHH OLIVER IS WILLING TO STUDY WITH HER INSTEAD OF DO QUIDDITCH STUFF. AND HE WAS MAKING NICE WITH HER FRIENDS. HE IS TOTALLY IN LOVE WITH HER.
I didn't appreciate the dig on my Percykins, but otherwise excellent chapter!Author's Response: You and Heather's friends have very similar ideas, surely you can't all be wrong... ;)
I apologise profusely to both you and Percy. I shall try to be nicer in the future xD
Thanks again!! :D Report Review
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