That was so lyrical, and had an enchanted fairytale quality about it. It was quite poetic, and I thought that suited the era you were writing this in (I'm writing my own founders story and I sometimes sound too modern; you had it perfect). You established Salazar well as the ominous villain, and I hope we will see more from his perspective in chapters to come. Keep writing! I will be reading!Author's Response: Ahh, thanks so much!! That's so nice of you to say :) I love the Founders era and I will most definitely be checking out your story to return the favor. Glad you liked this! Report Review
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