aw i love it. The story is great and i give you a good 10/10 Report Review
liked the story, a nice missing moment, though a little bit fluffy. A sequel would be appreciated..
Please, please, please check your grammar and spelling. Half the paragraphs had errors in them, many of which would easily have been fished out had you re-read the story. Remember: it's your responsibility as a writer to spell-check. A well-proofed story is easier to read, and the enjoyment of reading the story is the goal you as a writer are trying to fulfill.
Also, don't use too many clichés, and, with missing moments: try to keep your characters in-character! Nothing is more disturbing than a dutyfull George, a self-secure Neville, or a McGonagall breaking the rules :)
Nonetheless: rated 7/10, for a nice fluffy missing moment story. Report Review
write a sequal pleaseAuthor's Response: the sequal is on it's way... it's been written at the same time as the third.
But neither would have made sense without my next fic which is in the validation cue: Time of their life.
Hope you like it Report Review
I love it! Great alternative on what (ugh!) happened in 6th year.Author's Response: Oh you'll get to see the HBP moments in the third installment of interrupted... One phase: let there be R/Hr shouting!
Glad you've loved it: I love it too...
And if you want more HBP moments - consult the rest of my stories. Report Review
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