{reviewid: 842383, reviewer: 'Sophia%20Montgomery'}
5th January 2006:
When Ron says 'Think I did alright? ' in a questioning tone, you should have it with a question mark.
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{reviewid: 842374, reviewer: 'Sophia%20Montgomery'}
5th January 2006:
Wow! That's quite impossible- Ron's supposed to be quite the bright player. What happened there?!
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{reviewid: 842371, reviewer: 'Sophia%20Montgomery'}
5th January 2006:
What happened to the candy-named passwords? Interesting chapter.
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{reviewid: 247506, reviewer: 'ravenclaw22'}
12th October 2004:
Please write more!!!!!!!!!!!! That was really gr8!!!!!!!!!
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{reviewid: 118556, reviewer: 'Panda'}
17th March 2004:
You can't leave me like that. woah, amazing story! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
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{reviewid: 113248, reviewer: 'jessica'}
6th March 2004:
I just read your story and I see you haven't updated in a while. Please don't drop it. It's really good and you left a great cliffhanger. I'd love to see how that turns out.
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{reviewid: 110900, reviewer: 'jessica'}
29th February 2004:
HEY, THIS IS GREAT!!!! update soon!
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{reviewid: 70983, reviewer: 'FroBoy'}
29th September 2003:
Great story!!! Plz update soon!!!
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{reviewid: 69776, reviewer: 'madforharry'}
22nd September 2003:
Excellent....can't wait for more
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{reviewid: 58858, reviewer: 'NarcissaBlack'}
11th August 2003:
I love this story! Your capture the characters so well, your a great writer. I can\'t wait for you to update!
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{reviewid: 60644, reviewer: 'gina'}
10th August 2003:
this is really good! you\'ve got the character traits down very well... keep writing ! please!
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