Is her name sophie or claire? You refer to her with both names. Report Review
go ahead make it into a story, good set up. Harry needs other girlfriends and Draco is always fun to read about. Report Review
I'm a little upset with how Harry is portrayed here but perhaps that's the effect you were going for. The character you created (Warren) is over-the-top dramatic which is neat for a one-shot like this, but if you developed it into a longer story I think she would need to reveal other sides of her personality. I'm interested to see where you would take this so I'd say you should continue it. I'd like to see Harry re-enter the plot maybe with some jealousy for Malfoy. It's up to you, of course! Report Review
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