5 Reviews Found

Review #1, by ScorpiusRose17 The slow descent

29th May 2012:
Hi there!

Just wanted to stop by and give you another review on a story of yours. I really like this story. It is a bit different from anything I have ever read before so it's nice and original.

I think you do a great job getting Harry's reactions and characterization right. I liked how you described it even though the chapter is short, your descriptions have been awesome. They really give a great sense as to what is taking place.

I do have one question for you though...Why is the chapter background white?

Keep up the awesome writing! =)


Recenseo 2012

Author's Response: Hi again.

Thanks once again for stopping by and leaving another wonderful review.
So glad you enjoyed this chapter. I wanted to do something different where Harry was concerned, so I came up with this idea.
I don't know why the background is white. Will have to look into that one. And sorry about the delay in answering. I've been busy with Camp and a new Potter fanfiction site.

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Review #2, by bri_5_stars The slow descent

24th March 2012:
This was a good beginning, maybe a little confusing due to the formating, but still good. Nothing bad grammar-wise. I would like to read on, to see that is actually driving Harry to have his hallucinations.

Author's Response: Hi. Firstly thanks for stopping by.
I'm glad that you enjoyed the beginning of this story. I wanted to try something that would really be a continuation of the ending of the DH.
I really must get back to updating some of my earlier stories.
Thanks for the read and review.

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Review #3, by kestral14 The slow descent

13th September 2011:
Wow, interesting idea. I have to know what happens next, was it some kind of curse that's making Harry go crazy? Just the pressure of being The Chosen One? But don't tell me, I want to be surprised!

Author's Response: Hi.
Many thanks for stopping by and leaving these kind words. I won't spoil the surprise by giving you any clues.
I'll try and update this and my other stories asap. I hope to get trusted author status at some time, then I'd be able to submit every day.
Again many thanks.

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Review #4, by Riya Bannerjee The slow descent

16th May 2011:
a start of a good chap here.
just thought i should tell you to edit your summary. i think it should be hallucinations...

update soon...

Author's Response: First of all I would like to thank you. You have given me my 100th review of my stories. Thank you.

I will correct the spelling mistake shortly. I'm glad your still enjoying my stories. I'll update as soon as I can. Thanks once again for taking the time to leave a few remarks. Keep reading.

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Review #5, by javct The slow descent

12th May 2011:
it's good, keep on writing!! But (this is just my opinion) if you maybe elaborated more on things or even just made the next chapter a bit longer.
And just one mistake on the 2nd line you said filledf instead of filled.
just thought i should let you know. :D
It's really good though

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing the first chapter of my latest story idea. I hope to update this story soon, but in the meantime please feel free to read the start of the other stories that I already have posted.

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