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Review #1, by DetectiveMenace Chapter One: It Started With an Arm Wrestling Match...

16th May 2011:
This line bothered me a little: ""And you know good damn and well you are too clever for that."" Did you just mean goddamn well? You're so silly.
There are some moments when Sirius seems to be out of character, but it's nothing really serious. Haha...serious. Siriusly. Ha :D
Update soon please, m'dear!
(And by the by, I think it's o' clock, not 'o' Right?)

Author's Response: Siris is ver bi-polar with his characterization. James is, as well. In chapter two, it's going to be the same thing. He's slowly maturing.

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