This is just brilliant!!! You have a real talent for writing comedy and I can't help thinking that after such a shocking loss, Lily's suspension period might be reduced quite significantly!! This is a brilliant one-shot, it was a highly enjoyable read :D Report Review
i thought this was very cute. but the prelude to the pub scene was a bit lengthy. i think less exposition is often the best way to go.Author's Response: I know it's long, but being that Lily is who she is, I find it necessary to be there. This story is more about her than it is about solely the pub scene, anyway.
Thank you for reviewing! :) Report Review
I liked it. Especially how Logan is so level-headed and Lily's, well, insane, and they're so perfect.
I dunno what else to say. Oh, except that I didn't recognize the The Office quote. But I've never seen The Office. Though I'd like it very much if you told me what it was. I'm obsessed with quotes.Author's Response: I love this one-shot too. It was an accident when I wrote it. I hated it at first because it was so difficult to create, then it just kinda exploded out. :D Awesome.
Here's The Office quote:
"Do you mean you love me like, 'Oh, hey, there's Lily â I love that girl!' or do you mean you love me like you love me love me?"
Love it. Even though I hate Holly. :D Report Review
hahaha Lily is awesome... (:Author's Response: Yes she is. :D Report Review
This is so cute! I love the way how Lily is a teensy, tiny, ickle bit totally and utterly mental! :D Winners will be up within the week on my blog :)Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. :) Can't wait to find out! Report Review
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