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Review #1, by matthew

29th August 2011:

well, this is a review on the whole tale and its developing nicely, your descriptive work and language are up to scratch and im looking forward to finding out what happens next. however i would have enjoyed it more if the chapters were slightly longer, apart from that, perfection

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Review #2, by Spaz

Lessons and Love

7th July 2011:

Haha, I love the bit with Trelawney, it was hilarious! When are Willow gonna stop playing with their lives and get together? I mean it's obvious they like eachother. But I absolutely love this story. Update soon, please! And as usual keep up the amazingness! ;)

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Review #3, by Spaz

Shakes and Shocks

7th July 2011:

Aww, Seamus is so sweet! It was hilarious how he couldn't figure out Willow's reactions at all. What I like about this story is that it's very unpredictable, and quite unlike any story I've ever read. I really like the bond and friendship between the girls, it's quite realistic. Keep up the brilliance! :D

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Review #4, by Spaz

New beginnings

7th July 2011:

I like this story, it has a lot of potenial. Haha, of course Seamus was looking, why wouldn't he be? I shall continue to read your story, keep up the excellence! :)

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Review #5, by Aasiya333

New beginnings

11th May 2011:

Ooh
What next?
Update quickly.
Please...

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