Hiya, Lily from the forums.
Again, I think you captured the very essence of Snape. You showed his vulnerable side, but also his caring side, which doesn't get shown much. He wanted to protect his mother. I think the story in itself, though sad, it really believable and I can see Lily reacting that way.
Snape was amazing. I could still see him being the cynical old man he is in the books, but he has other sides, other parts, and you've done an amazing job in brining that out.
~LilyFireAuthor's Response: Thank you! You're such a great writer, and coming from you, this means so much to me. I'll be requesting again, thanks so much :D Report Review
I think you've captured Andromeda and her mother really well. I love the background you give, and the way you have her realieze her mother is actually true to her intents. It's wonderfully written. I love the last line, it's my favorite out of the chapter.
~LilyFireAuthor's Response: Thank you very much. That means a lot to me. I tried really hard on Andromeda's chapter :) thank you for the sweet review. Report Review
Bloody brilliant! Keep it up :)Author's Response: Thank you! :) Report Review
Hi! BrightStar here with your review.
I really enjoyed this, as you know I like your writing! Very poignant scene and one I was very interested in reading. Snapes relationship with his parents is key to understanding him and you really grasped this.
One thing I would say was that tobais calls snape a little bloke, I didnt realise that was an insult?
Eileen was very believable, you really got across why she stayed at him, and you know she obviously loved her son from the fact she left with him.
We know Lily is unfailingly kind, so it was lovely to see her in this light, and the parents she got it from. And Harry the dad, so cute to think its a family name.
Really interesting story, I'd love to see how it progresses!
Good luck with it!
B xAuthor's Response: :D Thank you for your review. In fact, a bloke isn't much of an insult, it's just something that people say there. A bloke is basically a jerk.
I didn't think I did too good with Eileen, so I'm glad that you like her. I was hoping that someone would, because she's honestly one of the hardest characters, even though she's not really written.
;) Next uploaded will be either James, Remus, or Sirius =D Report Review
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