Ahh, that was really cute - although I can't imagine Ron being that cute :P but he does love Hermione, so it's understandable :)
Just to let you know, your Latin is a bit dodge - doesn't mean what you want it to mean. If you want, send me a PM at the forums and I'll sort it for you?Author's Response: Aw thanks! Yeah, I shouldn't really trust Google Translate XD I'll keep your offer in mind though! Thank you xxx Report Review
Very sweet! My favorite part was the end :) Good job!Author's Response: Thank you so much! Report Review
This story is just so cute! I love it and I wish you luck with your challenge!
The characterisation for everyone was perfect, especially Hermione, it's just how I would imagine her to react after Ron had proposed. I loved the idea of the ring having the Hogwarts colours, it seems like that would be just the thing Hermione would want.
The place of the proposal sounded perfect! You detailed that part really well. I totally had a picture of that garden in my head. I felt the swing idea was so romantic, it was a really nice touch to make an already perfect proposal even more perfect.
10/10! TeamRon (Ravenclaw)Author's Response: Thank you so much! I can't wait for the challenge results! I'm glad you think the characterisation was perfect, I often worry that my interpretations of Ms Rowlings characters don't behave/act the way they do in the books. When I thought of the prospect of having to make up a ring, I thought to myself, what does Hermione love so much that I should make the ring based around it. Then it clicked. Hogwarts. It's where she learned everything she knew, the place that meant the most to her. I'm glad you think the graden part was detailed, that was a tricky part to write. The swing was something I came up with before I wrote the story, thats how I wished Justin Bieber to propose to me! *huh, I wish!* The proposal was meant for me, but I'm kind and gave it to Ron and Hermione! Thank you so much for giving it a 10, it means so much to me, my time and effort is appreciated! Thank you, and I will now go and review one of your stories *dashes over to author page* Love Livvy xxx :) Report Review
This is beautiful! Its so amazingly, mind blowingly, fantastic! More, more and more please!
P.S: I recently joined forces with Sophie on TDA, and would love to combine with you too!Author's Response: Thank you so much!! I'll have a talk to Sophie! xxx :) Report Review
aww cute. i kind of wanted a little conflict that gets resolved, but it was cuteAuthor's Response: Thank you! Your review has made my day! :) Report Review
love love love :) so cute :)Author's Response: Thank You! I love supportive comments! I love Ron and Hermione together, their so cute! Report Review
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