{reviewid: 2715218, reviewer: 'Sam'}
2nd July 2012:
This is really great. And i hope that you have Albus and Emily get together, and i would it really funny if you would make Lily and Jaz get together; it would make my day.
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{reviewid: 2667986, reviewer: 'Lillylover22'}
4th March 2012:
Yay he admitted it!! 9/10 : )
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{reviewid: 2667967, reviewer: 'Lillylover22'}
4th March 2012:
Al should fall for emily just as harper starts to like him again. 9/10 : )
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{reviewid: 2667966, reviewer: 'Lillylover22'}
4th March 2012:
It was good 9/10 : )
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{reviewid: 2667959, reviewer: 'Lillylover22'}
4th March 2012:
Wow mcgonagal really jumped to the wrong concluson there. 9/10 : )
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{reviewid: 2667957, reviewer: 'Lillylover22'}
4th March 2012:
Good chapter. 9/10 : )
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{reviewid: 2650987, reviewer: 'ForeverAWeasley'}
29th January 2012:
I love this story! I want to see how Al and Emily develop! Please continue and update soon!
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{reviewid: 2647296, reviewer: 'Lillylover22'}
21st January 2012:
This was good 9/10 : )
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{reviewid: 2647293, reviewer: 'Lillylover22'}
21st January 2012:
Well al definatly wasnt expecting harper to be cheating 9/10 : )
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{reviewid: 2647285, reviewer: 'Lillylover22'}
21st January 2012:
Haha this was great 9/10 : )
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{reviewid: 2647284, reviewer: 'Lillylover22'}
21st January 2012:
Oh wow that was funny. I loved the ending 9/10 : )
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{reviewid: 2647279, reviewer: 'Lillylover22'}
21st January 2012:
This was a great first chapter!! 9/10 : )
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{reviewid: 2647200, reviewer: 'weasleytwins123'}
21st January 2012:
Loved this chapter! I can't wait for Al and Emily to get it on! Hopefully a good old fashioned smooch is on the cards at some point?
As for writers block cure, I found brainstorming random ideas for a story helped (especially if they're absolutely mad!) and I also wrote a one shot when I was suffering from it just to clear my head a bit, and it really worked!
As for ideas, maybe we could have a scene with Harper, Emily and Al? And Emily gets really confused when Albus is no longer interested in Harper? Or, Emily meets another guy and Albus gets all twitchy... that would be fun! Don't really know, it's your story, but I hope I've helped as I want to cure your writers block... I'd love to see the next chapter up as soon as possible! :)
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{reviewid: 2597910, reviewer: '_hopeless_romantic_'}
3rd October 2011:
YAY!!! FINALLY! Omg... this is was cute!! I absolutely LOVE Al at this point. You're awesome! *blushes*
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{reviewid: 2597908, reviewer: '_hopeless_romantic_'}
3rd October 2011:
Haha! The ending was great! I absolutely love Scorpius and Jaz! And you should totally put more Jaz and Lily in the story... they're kind of adorable!
Anyway, totally loved the rest of the story as well. Especially the Hagrid part. It was really funny!
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{reviewid: 2588998, reviewer: 'Captain%20Kill%20Wormtail'}
13th September 2011:
I LOVE this story!!! Please update soon, I can't wait!!!
10/10
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{reviewid: 2587222, reviewer: 'Mary%20Ann'}
9th September 2011:
LMAO!! loved the humor update soon!
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{reviewid: 2585644, reviewer: 'hushpuppy'}
7th September 2011:
Fred totally got what he deserved 'cause he knew that Albus fancied Emily. In fact, he probably wanted that reaction, didn't he?
Author's Response: Oh, Fred! We never know what his intentions are, now do we? ;)
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{reviewid: 2585531, reviewer: 'Muse2488'}
6th September 2011:
I love it!! Can't wait to see what happens between Emily and Al!! =]] More please!!!
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{reviewid: 2585482, reviewer: 'katieKMY'}
6th September 2011:
I'll cry if you do not write more soon.
Author's Response: Aww! No, don't cry! I'll post the next chapter asap! :)
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{reviewid: 2585128, reviewer: 'Jess%20the%20Enthusiast'}
6th September 2011:
Great chapter! The beginning was hilarious when Al was predicting what was going to happen next and when he was disappointed that Meg wasn't objecting Ted and Vic's engagement because she was in love with Vic. I giggling like a loon!
And the part with with drunk Ted was really funny too.
And when will Al and Emily just snog aleady?!?! That's my suggestion for the story; I want some Al/Emily time. They're so cute together; I love them!
And poor Al; I felt so bad for him when Emily had to kiss Fred because of the mistletoe. But it was hilarious when Al kicked the crap out of him :D
I love this story; I hope that you get over your writer's block soon!
10/10 :D
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{reviewid: 2584944, reviewer: 'Loony_Scorpy'}
6th September 2011:
Heh heh. I love that Al bashed Fred, absolutely hilarious! And he gt so ridiculously angry at Fred, I was like yeeesss you get angry for your girl! Or something like that...I love the random Meg person, she made me laugh, and the fact that Al predicted it! Heh. I can't wait for your next chapter :D
Author's Response: I know right? Al angry is kinda hot! ;)
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{reviewid: 2570350, reviewer: 'lilybean'}
14th August 2011:
That was so cute!!! OMG! He finally realised it! this is such an awesome story! I cant wait for the next chapter!!
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{reviewid: 2570348, reviewer: 'lilybean'}
14th August 2011:
LOVE Jerry's character! he's so adorable! and the ending was epic. Scorp and Jaz are so hilarious! and you should totally write a Lily-Jaz spinoff!
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{reviewid: 2570345, reviewer: 'lilybean'}
14th August 2011:
I totally LOL-d at the Emily niffler shirt thing! it was so funny!! great story!:)
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