Nice story, I will continue with the next one later today. Thanks for a nice read.

River

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Have to mention it.. Harry, et al would be in the 7th year dorm, not 6th. They are all in the 7th year except, Luna and Ginny.

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I really like this story. keep up the good work.

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Wow!! Amazing so far!! I adore it!! I have never read such a great fan fiction story!

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Thank you. This story is great. I left a review after the first chapter and figured I would wait and review in the final chapter. I truly feel that you did a great job and can't wait to start on book 2. I only had one problem, out of all the stretching made in this book. The "speaking without speking" thing was a little too far out there. At least for all 4 of them to posses it. The direction you have taken with the power Harry now has, okay. But all of them.. Just seemed like too much of a stretch. Thank you again and I figured out how to add favorites. (It helps if you are logged in at the time)..

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Finally. A story that is well written and the entire reason I joined this site. My first story I found met these expectations and I enjoyed it quite a bit. But then I found disturbing stories that I will not repeat here. I will mark you as my favorite author (as soon as I find out how). This site is a little confusing on how to find authors that write and continue in the same universe (and alter slightly for poetic license). The continuing story. Expertly done.. Thank you...

Author's Response: Thank you. I hope as the story evolves you continue to feel this way.

I have tried to stay as true to the story as possible. A few minor changes here and there, along with creating (lots of) other characters for our friends to interact with. I would not dream of saying that these are 100% my stories, since I was not the one who started it. JK Rowling deserves all the credit for this, and I have been inspired to continue what she has begun.

Feel free to make any comments you want. I will try to respond as best I can.

FYI I am starting to work (in my head) on book three. Like book two it begins where the previous book ends.





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i love your story. i just have 1 major problem its rather distracting when you read slang words during a story e.g. thru. i would recommend you use proper words e.g. through. also using an and sign instead of the word and. but other than that its brilliant.

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I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, LOVE! this story! I can't wait for book two to begin to come out, there are so many things I want to find out about your story! And, by the way, thank you for keeping me in suspence while I waited for the next chapters to come out!

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Really liked the chapter, and finding out more about the threat. Great stuff!

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Short but interesting and enjoyable

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Very interesting and exciting

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Very funny and well thought out

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Still very interesting

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Great to read. Very exciting

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Well thought out and interesting

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Great Job!!! Now I can't wait for book 2!

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um... you sort of skipped chapter 22

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Brilliant story. I loved it! I don't and have never considered it to be easy to write good fiction - far from it, especially fan-fiction - when people have pre-conceptions about how recognised characters behave and speak.

I really liked how you wrote a very positive story, and went slowly through each issue, covering all the details like the bank, inheriting, etc, and how Harry and the Weasleys dealt with the aftermath.

Lastly that Harry became what I have always thought he should be - powerful, espeicially with Ginny at his side.

So thankyou for writing this, and I am glad that you haven't ended it here, and look forward to the sequel and more of the same.

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I can't wait to read the heros ceremony.

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I really like how you are covering all the angles. Great stuff! PLEASE POST MORE SOON!!

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cool :)

next on please

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Ok, I like where the story is going but I just have one suggestion to make. When the Lestrange vault is being divided up, it seems that Harry is the "lord" of the manor or something and is doing everyone a favor by letting them have the money. I feel that Harry would be more humble about what he has inherited because of where he comes from. Like I said just a thought.

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i can't wait..please make the next one :)

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hey can u write some more this is really good xx

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This has been a wonderful story but if this is "completed" I hope you are planning a sequel! You have really left us hanging!

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