like i said before, im a HUGE fan of taylor and jkr and you just put them together so beautifully! its like you actually put the video down into words its so gr8! luv it!Author's Response: Thanks, it did help that I owned the video, thanks for reviewing. ~WR Report Review
I noticed that you switched tenses several times throughout the story. Some of it was written in present tense, and some of it was written in past tense, so you might want to change that and stick with one or the other. As always, Voldy Needs a HugAuthor's Response: Thank you, sorry that I didn't reply sooner. I'll look over the story again. Thanks again, and please look at my new story Fix You. ~WR Report Review
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