6 Reviews Found

Review #1, by EllaShanti Lily Evans

23rd September 2011:

I'm begging you dude! pretty please finish it, I'm loving it! :D:D:D love this story :)

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Review #2, by EllaShanti Girls Give Me Dandruff (prologue)

23rd September 2011:
I just read this again and I was just laughing so much!!! Love paragraph 4 :D
so good!!

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Review #3, by dirtydeedsdonedirtcheap Girls Give Me Dandruff (prologue)

22nd May 2011:
If it was possible (although I think it actually might be) I'd copy and paste the whole chapter in this little box right here (that's the possible part) and then make a big arrow and in big bold lettering i'd write MY FAVORITE QUOTE HERE (the impossible part) because honestly the whole thing was just so good. I can't even say what my favorite part was because every sentence was just that good.

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Review #4, by EllaShanti Mary Macdonald

6th May 2011:
Quite interesting although some grammar mistakes but who cares! Please tell me this isn't abandoned I want to know what happens!

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Review #5, by Christine_Nighting Mary Macdonald

5th May 2011:
Only one problem:

"He smiled and ladled some gross looking soup in to his bowls Remus and Peter came strolling towards us."

That should be two sentences. Other than that, I loved it!

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Review #6, by Mayline D Girls Give Me Dandruff (prologue)

27th April 2011:
If this was facebook, I'd be hittin' the "like" button. Keep the chapters coming!

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