7 Reviews Found

Review #1, by sinwillys822 Chapter 5

17th January 2012:
Oh my god please update soon. I am addicted.

Author's Response: Thanks. If you want to read more, goto fanfiction or siye. This site is behind with the story.

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Review #2, by Jsez444 Chapter 5

20th July 2011:
Ugh, really. I've been waiting for something to happen for a while now and you leave me hanging? A bit of a slow start in my opinion but I know the last one was worth it in the end. You really do love teasing with these smaller very vague plot lines huh? Although I'm pretty sure I know who Kate is... Big hints in this chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Go sign up on Siye, the story is much further along there. HPFF takes very long to update. Hope to read more from you soon. Thank you!

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Review #3, by Alex Chapter 4

12th June 2011:
I have a paper due in 3 days which is worth 40% of my grade for a topic at 3rd year university level. I then have an oral due the day after that is worth 15%. Instead of doing that, I have just finished reading A Darker Shade of Light, parts 1 and 2 in a single day. I read only the best Harry Potter fanfics and I must say this is up there amongst the best. Please, update soon, I love WoT and HP and cannot wait to see what happens.

Author's Response: I've been there, often the day before an exam :) Will be uploading asap. Hope the paper and oral go well. I usually hated the later. Thank you for the review, helps to make my day!

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Review #4, by aks_snape Chapter 3

25th May 2011:
nice !!! but plz write more about harry and ginny and their plot in their world

Author's Response: Thank you! Most of the story is written. Will see if there are places to tell more about their trip away from Britain.

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Review #5, by Jsez444 Prologue

14th May 2011:
Really glad you're back! Can't wait to read the new chapters!!

Author's Response: Thank you, I hope you enjoy the story!

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Review #6, by puiwaihin Chapter 1

1st May 2011:
Oh, that was mean. That was cruel. Stopping the scene just as everyone's wands were pointed at each other? Sadistic!

I really like how you got back to the characterization of everyone with just the right dialog and details. Very nice chapter, very exciting, and I'm looking forward to hearing more about whomever this Kate is.

Author's Response: Sorry for being cruel. I guess it comes from writing nearly the entire story before posting. I sort of missed that it was a cliffhanger. It was just the point where I switched POV. The rest is in the next chapter.

Glad you liked the chapter seeing as it mostly sets the scene while explaining some things. From here on in things should start moving. I guess you could call this the second part of the prologue.

Thank you for reading and leaving a review. I don't get many on HPFF. So I really appreciate it. I gather that H/G stories aren't that big here, but this is still a great sight.


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Review #7, by puiwaihin Prologue

1st May 2011:
Looking forward to getting back into the story.

I was kind of hoping you would not bring Tom Riddle back even though his defeat seemed a bit too easy. I was looking forward to Dark Lord Ron, but seems that is not to be.

Glad you are taking the time to have beta readers look over the story! There were a few little bits that jumped out at me that distracted from my enjoyment of the story. But still, the overall writing quality is there.

Looking forward to the rest of it!

Author's Response: Dark Lord Ron, that could have been interesting :) Honestly, the thought never crossed my mind.

I had a beta, MinistryMalcontent, for the previous story and this one, just never mentioned his name since I've not seen his name on this site, but he has got a good story SIYE.

He did an amazing job helping my story. In the end there was only so much he could improve. I am hoping this one will be better since I am building on the 120k words of the previous story. Still, there is a lot to learn especially with dialogue. I tend to spend too much on internal thoughts and not actual speaking.

Hope you enjoy this story.


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