Loving this chapter so much and the mention of Tonks just makes me want to cry and scream at the same time >.< Can't wait for the next chapter x :)Author's Response: Thank you so much! Report Review
Awesome chapter! I really can't wait to see how your going to describe how they learn all the animagi stuff :)Author's Response: Oh, that's definately going to be... interesting ;) Report Review
HA I LOVE HOW REMUS IS ALREADY LIKING TONKSAuthor's Response: It was meant to be! lol Report Review
Hey it's really great. Just one thing lol you've spelt Lily's name wrong, it's just one L in the middle.Author's Response: Shoot. I'll go back and fix that. Thanks for the heads up! And thanks for reviewing! Report Review
OMG I JUST WANT TO GIVE REMUS A HUGAuthor's Response: lol, yeah, so do I ;) Report Review
I really liked the way you kept the flow of the story moving--like how you moved year to year, and the flow of the chapters themselves. I also like how you portrayed the Marauders. I think you have a good feel for their personalities.
I also appreciate how few grammar and spelling errors you have.
Excellent :p 10/10Author's Response: Thank you so much! That means a lot to me :) Report Review
Wow, totally hate Bethany right now.
But I love this story haha update soon!Author's Response: Yeah, I do too, haha ;) And I will! Thanks for the review! Report Review
I really liked it & not just because I'm related to you . LolAuthor's Response: Thanks Grandma! lol Report Review
amazing.i love it.plzzz update faster.i love your story.UPDATE
PLZ? 10/10 =DAuthor's Response: Aww, thank you so much! New chapter coming soon! I think you'll like it! Thanks again! Report Review
love this story :) and I like that you explain how everything happens :) really good (:Author's Response: Thanks a bunch! I'm really glad you like it! Thanks for reviewing (it makes me feel special, haha)! Report Review
Ahahaha..how awkward and cute is Remus?? =]
Wow, he almost forgot to go back to Hogwarts to change...that would've been seriously bad =/
Nice lying on the spot though!Author's Response: Haha, yeah, he's a good liar :) I love writing him in his little awkward faze, but I'm also excited to get into his darker side, too. I hope you liked the chapter! Thanks for the review! Report Review
Sounds great! I am excited to read this whole thing. Your flow with words are amazing!Author's Response: Thank you so much! That means a lot to me! Yes, please keep reading! You won't be sorry ;) Thanks again! Report Review
Fantastic.Absolutely marvolous.The only thing that could make this better is if it was longer. I enjoyed it so much and it was over too soon.It felt as if I was reading from J.K herself! I'll be looking out for more of your work.Author's Response: Thank you so much! I know, it should have been longer, but I had a great idea for the next chapter, so this was just kind of a way to make it happen. Thanks for reviewing, and keep reading! Next chapter will be up soon! Report Review
I like it, but was Dumbledore the headmaster of Hogwarts at this time? Just wondering.
But the rest of it is very funny and charming :DAuthor's Response: Yes, indeed he was! Lol, thanks for the review! Keep reading! Report Review
Oh No! He-Who-Must-Not-Be-Named!Author's Response: Haha, yeah! Though a Slytherin has nothing to fear, right? ;) Report Review
The Marauders. so thats how they got the name!Author's Response: Yes! All thanks to Nearly Headless Nick! Haha. Report Review
love it the sorting is always the best!Author's Response: Glad you like it! That stupid song took way too long to write, lol! Report Review
LOL I can tell that James and Sirius end up rubbing off on Remus!Author's Response: Hmm... okay, maybe just a little bit! ;) But they're very charismatic, so you can't really blame him, haha! Report Review
I Love Remus, get more Remus !!
Are you going to write more on this ?Author's Response: Of course! The new chapter is up now! I just took a short break, but I'm back to writing about more Marauder shinanigans! Report Review
I love it!!!
10/10Author's Response: Thank you! And I will! I love your user name, btw! lol Report Review
I love this story so far :) well done please write some more becasue this is really good :)Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you like it! The next chapter should be up soon! Thanks for the review! Report Review
Aw 11 year old Remus is cute :)Author's Response: Haha, thanks! I love Remus! Report Review
Hahahaha what Peter did was hilarious =]
I like Sirius and Remus commentating, although I think it would have been funnier if it had been McGonagall correcting Sirius just like she does with Lee Jordan =]Author's Response: That's kind of what I was basing it off of, actually. But I do have a plan for that, actually! Don't worry, Professor McGonagall isn't going to keep her nose out of commentating for long! Thanks for the review! Report Review
Hi there :) Here I am reviewing yet another lovely chapter :) and I have a single age thingy for you again. Hope you don't mind :)
Arthur Weasley's oldest child Bill is at least 8 years older than Harry, because his younger brother Charlie had already left Hogwarts when Harry started, making him at least 7 years older than Harry. We know that James (and Lily) was 21 when Harry was born, making them 13 when Bill was born. As you put it here, Arthur is only 2 years older than the Marauders and would therefore have been 15 when Bill was born. You can find his real age and birthday at the Harry Potter Wikia. Might I suggest making this one of Arthur's brothers? We don't know anything about them other than they are his brothers. There are two if you are wondering. We never learned there names or ages and the Muggle loving thing could very well be a family thing :)
and then I am sitting here thinking 'ouch! ouch! ouch!'. You see, I find it quite ironic that you chose 'Doloroso' as the incantation for this counter curse, as it is also the name of the Cruciatus Curse in Danish (the Danish incantation is 'Dolor')
But you did a wonderfull job, and I hope you update soon! I'm looking forward to see where you can and will take this :)
I'm glad you could use my help from the last review :)
10/10Author's Response: Actually, this chapter was denied because the chapter title wasn't appropriate for 15+, which is what they're supposed to be, so the person who denied me actually told me the same thing! I need to change it, but I haven't had time :) Thank you though, and definately let me know if I have any more age problems (becuase, honestly, sometimes I just slip up and become too lazy to research ages, which is a bad thing on my part) Thanks for the review! Report Review
I really love this! The way you've portrayed these characters is exactly how I see them, you've done really well! Please keep going!Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm really glad that you like it! And don't worry, I've already got the next few chapters already written, and they're coming out soon! Report Review
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