Oh. My. Flipping. Goodness. This was a remarkable story. I typically refrain from reading anything that has to deal with Harry Potter or anything linked to that specific fandom. I only stumbled onto this site on a whim, and the "random story" button brought me here.
I can only say that this is the single most impressive and well-written Harry Potter fanfiction I have read in my life. And I'm not saying that lightly.
I thoroughly enjoyed Susan's whit and shyness around others. She's extremely relatable in the way that she is a brilliant character who can say the things she needs to, assuming she can open her mouth first. I am adoring the blossoming relationship between Sirius and Susan, the Mutt and the Turtle. I cannot wait to see what happens next. You've got me on the edge of my seat with anticipation. This story is just so lovely...
I could certainly go on for the whole 6000 characters that the site allows, but I wouldn't want to waste your time. Just know that I don't give out compliments like this lightly, and that you deserve every letter.
Zalia Henderson Report Review
This story is really fantastic so far! It is so original and the characters are very realistic. I love Susan she is absolutely fantastic and Sirius is pretty awesome too. Please don't give up on this story and update soon. I'll be waiting...
:) Report Review
:) i love your story.. It's a really nice plot...
Cant wait for the next chapter! :D Report Review
oh! another chapter.. that's quite a pleasant surprise.. and it was a nice one too...
i'm glad to see that my prediction that padfoot would be starting to get more and more fond with out very own turtle is turning out to be true.. :P
turtle can sing? woah! first quidditch and now a talent for singing and handling magical creatures..
you really DO have watch out for the quite ones don't you? ;)
anyway, update soon!
PS: you might just want to start responding to the reviews.. most readers find it impolite if they go through the trouble of reviewing and they don't even get a response! just a little piece of friendly advice.. :)Author's Response: Eeep! Thanks! Sorry about that, was off the site for a while. I keep meaning to thank you for your reviews, they're always great, and it's fantastic to have someone review every time :) Report Review
love the description of her voice
keep on writing!
=)Author's Response: Sorry I didn't respond to this sooner! Anyway, thanks for your review! I'm glad you liked the description of her voice, I worked really hard on it, trying to capture what I was imagining. Good to know it worked out :) Report Review
yay! you're still alive and typing! thank god, i was starting to have doubts on that!
sarcasm aside, i'm absolutely delighted to get another chapter to read! it was the best chapter yet and i was smiling like an idiot for most of the time...
btw, it looks like padfoot id beginning to get feelings for suzy...
i hope she opens up more to him!
fanna Report Review
I really love the story! It's funny without trying to hard and it is really well written all around! Update soon, i'm excited for the next chapter!Author's Response: Sorry I didn't respond to this way back when... Oops. I'm glad you like it! It's good to know the humor's coming across well. Thank you! Report Review
Love it whenever Sirius wonders what Prongs put in his drink. Like how you make Susan a good quiddich player :)
Write on! Report Review
Please update, its really good.
update? :D Report Review
I loved the end! Haha, that was so funny. It actually made me snort out loud.Author's Response: Thanks! It's always nice to know the humor doesn't fall flat. : ) Report Review
this story is amazing!! i like how susan isnt the perfect person, and sirius doesnt just fall in love with her right away...youre so good at writing the characters!Author's Response: Thanks! Susan's really fun to work with. I'm glad you like her! Report Review
lol, that just has to be embarrassing. pads threw all his products out because a girl told him that he was feminine and his luck is such that the very girl slips on one of his hair potions and finds out what he did.
yup definitely embarrassing.
i missed dodger in this chapter...
through the whole chapter, i was like: oh, dodger's gonna come... is dodger coming yet?... maybe he'll come now...
ah well. beggars can't be choosers can they?
well, update soon, and remember: i'm always there for ya!
fanna. Report Review
i love dodger!
he awesome, he's brilliant, he's so.. SIRIUS!
i luv the way this story seems to be going..
keep it up..
i'll be back on the next chapter...
fannaAuthor's Response: Aw... you make me smile. Loyally, indeed! Report Review
wonderful. ABSOLUTELY SPIFFING!
and this epic piece of amazingness in going straight into my list of check-if-it's updated-stories...
and lemme tell ya, only some stories make it to that list..
you shud be honoured..
anyway... i was very sirius when i said that i loved this story.
keep it up and count me in when you have to depend on readers...
PS:(nope, fanna's not my name.. but u can't just call me that instead of "hpfanno1") Report Review
I'm really loving this story so far. The plot and characterizations are great. Can't wait for the next chapter!Author's Response: Thanks! I'll try to get the next chapter up as soon as I can. Unfortunately... that might not be so soon. :( Report Review
I like this a lot! Update soon!Author's Response: I'll certainly try! But not until after midterms... Eek. Report Review
Oh my god write more! I really love your story! :)Author's Response: Thanks! That's the kind of thing that makes my day :) Report Review
LMFAO I LOVE THIS!
its soo good!
i wan to know more about susan!
I LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!Author's Response: Thanks so much! It's my favorite thing when people think my stuff is funny. Because there's always the alternative, which is they could tell you were trying but it didn't... exactly... work. That's always awkward. Glad to know you liked it! I'm working on getting the next chapter up. Report Review
I loved it :) Can't wait to read more.
Ah Susan so awkward, I can relate to her.Author's Response: Haha, yay awkward people! Somewhere in the creative department of my brain, Susan is thanking you. Report Review
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