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Review #1, by schoenberg12 Prologue

29th May 2011:
ooh good start

just one thing:
this sentence is a little confusing
The raven haired girl responded with a smile, hold(did you mean holding) on (to) Cedricís hand tightening slightly.

Author's Response: Ooh! I'll have to proof read it! I'll definitely keep that in mind :D Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! :)

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