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Review #1, by magicmuggle01

3rd October 2011:

The dreaded knock on the door. This must be someone with the news about a certain persons magical abilities. I must add this favs and give you 10/10 and plz update soon.

Author's Response: I will, it's just getting the inspiration and time to write to happen at the same time that's the hard part!

I will update soon, I promise.

Love Pepper

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Review #2, by magicmuggle01

The accident that started it all

3rd October 2011:

A good start and very sad ending to your first chapter. I could picture everything in my mind as the story unfolded. 10/10 and to move on.

Author's Response: Thank you.

This is my first attempt at "original" fiction.

I'm keeping it in the Harry Potter world where I am comfortable, but the OC is going to be based on me.

A few things though:

No! There is no romantic involvement with any male character from the books

No! The character is not perfect. She improvises with some things (like potions ... BOOM!) and is prone to being over sensitive until she learns to mellow out. She is also not repulsively imperfect either.

But she will grow up, she will face things and these things will shape her and the future if the wizarding world.

Love Pepper

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