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Review #1, by Analise child talks and births

30th May 2011:
Really cool idea! I love how Teddy was 'talking' to Victoire. You do have some spelling and grammar issues, so I'd suggest using spell check and reading over it a few times before you finish. I try to read mine out loud, it seems to help :P
Keep up the good work!!

Author's Response: thanks so much!:) i appreate your help:) ahah funny thing is that i do use spell check ahha! keep reading:)!

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