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Review #1, by magicmuggle01 The End is Near...

4th May 2012:
I think you've done very well with this topic, cancer etc is not an easy topic to write about.
The feelings of the characters are well thought out, though I feel that you could have been more discriptive about Erina's feelings. Over all, a great one shot and 9/10.

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Review #2, by Amy The End is Near...

1st March 2012:
Its good...but i feel you should extend a bit more and make it a bit more deep. The overall story outline is good, you just need to elaborate :) great story otherwise!

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Review #3, by Jess the Enthusiast The End is Near...

7th July 2011:
That was so sad :(

Good job for a first fanfic! Maybe make it a little longer next time; I wanted to know more about the characters and the situation. But it was good though! Keep writing :D

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading, reviewing and of course, for your suggestions!! :)

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