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Reading Reviews for The Eagle and the Lion
  
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Review #1, by sirix New starts

8th May 2012:
interesting but a little runny i mean you start on the platform then trastion to the train smoothly but after that its just jumbled and you throw jack in without really introducing at all. and how was he put in ravenclaw without going through sorting. also the heromine diary at the end while a good idea is a little confusing maby puting a little heromine pov before it a few times will help people understand that is what going on right there. continue this story please its a good idea and consept but in this chapter a slightly poor exucution.

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