Hey! here to review for the challenge!
I'm very intrigued so far! I never read anything about the Blacks unless it's Sirius! So It was nice to read something different and read about someone who I usually forget about!
I really like your characterization, it's pretty much spot on perfect in my opinion!
This is really different to anything I've come across and I LOVE the whole Romeo and Juliet thing going on! Its clever and quirky! :)
Cant wait to see where this goes. :) Well done!Author's Response: Thank you! Your challenge and the quote really fit in well and it was so fun! Report Review
love it :D cant wait to see where this story goes!!!Author's Response: thank you for reviewing! :) Report Review
I love this story! It is so different from everything else i've read on here!Author's Response: thanks for your review!
yeah, I'm making this story kind of correspond with the major events in the "Romeo and Juliet" play. Not just the forbidden love part :)
Great story! You have got to continue writing!Author's Response: Thank you! Report Review
This was great. I love the way you have portraid Regulus and how his story links to Romeo and Juliets. They're not going to die at the end are they? Or is it going to some how link to the locket? xxx Keep this up. I love this story. Very priginal
Love magicpuffleAuthor's Response: Thank you so much for your review!!! :D Well we all know who really dies in the end *tear* and yes, I will incorporate the locket somewhere. I'm trying to make it as "Romeo and Juliet" as possible.
thanks again! Report Review
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