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like I said WAAAY TO FAST! I have to know something... did she know those girls (her sisters) before? And if she did how could they already act like sisters and calling each other nicknames after just one day? How could she accept Draco after what he had called her after one day? Did Draco know about the engagement before she mentioned it to him? (and if he didn't I can't believe that he already bought a ring) How could she already be like a best friend with Blaise? After one day without her friends she just couldn't call them Potty, Weasel and Weaslette or could she? Her emotions is going like a roller-coaster I'm serious, and it's scary and confusing, could you simmer down a little bit? And can you stop pushing the fast-forward button? O.o'
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It all happened WAY to fast. I mean it. It's like you put on a fast-forward button. It's not a good thing, from my opinion and when I read I got really confused about everything. It should take more time for them (and with them I mean Dramione) I think, but it's up to you and change it, I just wanna help. 3/10
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WRITE MORE PLEASE! :) Report Review
oh, and to the person with the review under mine? yea. this is FANfiction. therefore, not all stories have to be canon. so shut up, yeah?!
thanks so much.
xoxoAuthor's Response: thanxs so much!! Report Review
hahahah good story sheashea.
:) xAuthor's Response: Idol, huh?? My ego is inflating!!!lol Report Review
biggest fail ever: final year at hogwarts Dumbledor is DEADAuthor's Response: I made it so was alive. Snape and Draco both failed kill him Report Review
I love it so far,please keep the chapters coming. I'd love to find out what happens further into this.Author's Response: thanx so much. any tips??? Report Review
That was really good its just all happening too fast! you should try to break it up more! but i love the plot (:Author's Response: Thanx, any ideas on how to break it down??? Report Review
I think you need to do a bit of editing on this, it is a bit confusing, also it happened way to fast, the dramione part, if you want, i could help edit this for you, make it sound a little better and not as rushed and ive you more tips nd a background so to speak, if you want to have a look at my writing, i have a story going on atm, about draco and hermione. I would like to help you, since this story does have potential :)Author's Response: Thanx. Any tips on how to do that??? Report Review
WOW! She has to compete with 4 more for her parents attention. LOL This means trouble. LOLAuthor's Response: you're gonna love the part when the sisters gang up on the new 'Golden Trio' Report Review
The story has potential, but you have one major error. Quintuplets is for sets of five not four.Author's Response: oh, um. I can always add another sister or a brother. Any tips?? Report Review
To be honest, I found it very unbelievable. There has to be a little more of a prologue to this story if Dramione are going to be friends, and joking together. Also, the family part confused me. You should explain it more. This story could be good, if it was longer and more fleshed out, with a little bit more explanation on every end.
AimeAuthor's Response: thanxs for the review. I'll edit it. Report Review
I really love this! Please keep writing!Author's Response: thanx, got any tips? Report Review
So far I like it. Keep it going...I will be waiting.Author's Response: thanx. any tips? Report Review
I kind of liked it! Something happened a bit quick, and something was kind of unrealistic, but after all, I enjoyed reading it!Author's Response: thanx, I'll do my best to edit it. Report Review
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