I can't- as in- CAN NOT- wait to read more.
I love it, not only because i hate the main character; but, also because you have done a wonderful job at writing it.Author's Response: Thanks! I really like writing mean characters, so hopefully this'll be a lot of fun XD Report Review
wow. no offence, but i deteste your character. shes one real bitch. characters like this NEVER grow on me whatsoever because they just ANNOY me. its so unrealistic. ive read another story like this one and it really resembles it so its not very original... well ill keep reading if you post but i really dislike your OC.Author's Response: I'm sorry you feel this way. I know Altair seems really horrible in this chapter, but she really is just putting on a face, and I hope if you do continue to read she'll grow on you, even if you doubt it. I really enjoy writing her, and though she might be a little hard to relate to at times, I was kind of sick of writing those quirky, outcast characters that seem to fill every story. I personally haven't read another story like this, but if you think you have maybe send me the name and I'll check it out? I woulnd't want anyone to think I was copying them. Thanks for revewing, even if you didn't really like it. Report Review
I think this story is really, really good. It's so different from anything else you read; a character who is perfect without being a complete Mary Sue?!
You've got a slick writing style, and I can't wait for the next chappie ^_^
bye lovee :-)Author's Response: Hehe, thanks! Nobody's ever called me 'slick' before. I'm having a lot of fun writing this story, so I'm glad you're having fun reading it XD Report Review
I really, really like your story. It's writen really well and I love the idea. Though hope she gets a little nicer? Its a really nice change from the normal stories about girls who arn't ever noticed. Your main character is awsome.
:D XAuthor's Response: Thanks! Yeah, the story is basically about Altair getting nicer. But she won't lose her spark!
I was just sick of writing about people like me, I guess. I wanted to try and get into the head of somebody popular XD
Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
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