I must say I am in love with your Dramiones! I love that they're fighting all the time, it's great to see that even though they're in love they're still behaving like themselves.
Draco is destroying things! I love it! The anger is great!
Narcissa is very wise, I like that she's talking to Draco and helping him through this.
I'm loving Ginny and Harry in this, it's nice to know that Ginny was shopping a lot when she first started going out with Harry.
Go Goyle!! Being there for Draco and warning him about Pansy and Daphne. He's a good friend, although he didn't stop the others from saying things.
I love friendly Draco, being all matey with Harry and being Uncle to his kids :D
I'm so glad that Hermione and Draco are back together! And yay! Hermione is pregnant! So happy right now! AHHH even happier with the proposal!!
I love that Harry is basically like a child with wanting to go into the room, hehe and him already packed the boys bags to stay at Draco and Hermiones :D
I love this story!!! Seriously I can only feel love for your stories! They're so brilliant! Report Review
This was so sweet. I love it with every fiber of my being. The break-up was hilarious (he blew up the flat. what the heck?), the aftermath was depressing, and the non-proposal was cute and funny at the same time ("if that was a proposal, it sucked"). This is definitely one of my favorites, of yours, and of Dramiones in general. So well written, it's pretty perfect! :)
-Katherine045 (Slytherin)Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it. :) Report Review
Heir... I loved their fight... not that they fought... but I found it to be very realistic. Great job depicting his anger and him smashing things. I could totally see it happening!
My favorite line... "...feathers from the cushions filled the room like fog and fell down like snow."
That is a wonderfully descriptive line... and I think you should do this more often, as it is perfect imagery in this scene. It is a wonderful detail that I absolutely loved. MORE!
I loved Narcissa's motherly advice and was pleasantly surprised by Goyle's visit warning him about the others.
I thought it a bit odd that he had the ring while they had the fight and was shocked that she was pregnant and hadn't told him yet. So that was a bit abrupt... other than that... I thought it was great... I LOVED the beginning fight... I have to say that was my favorite part... very realistic!
Thanks so much for posting!
Dark WhisperAuthor's Response: Thank you!
He kept the ring in his pocket because they had been fighting so much that he was wondering whether or not marrying her was the best thing to do.
She had only known for a couple of days. Would you want to tell someone you're pregnant while you were fighting? Lol. Report Review
Very good and funny, I really enjoyed it!Author's Response: Thank you :) Report Review
Well and her's another review from me today:
I don't know why nobody reviewed this amazing one-shot till now! It is brilliant! At the beginning I was not so certain if I liked it, because Hermione buying so many things and spending that lot of money for vases and stuff seemed not to fit. But as I realised that this was just the main thing the story was about and that Draco, too didn't know her like that, I really liked it this way! And its not the bog-standard story, where they live together and have a baby and get married...it is a LOT better!
And the proposal was ... just sweet! Well, the first one which actually wasn't one was funny and the second one just cute!
Really great done!
Greetings HannaAuthor's Response: Thank you!
I got the idea from the music video Takin' Back My Love by Enrique Iglesias and Ciara. I loved the song and the idea wouldn't leave me alone so I wrote it :)
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