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Review #1, by Dojh167 I Love the Way You Lie

20th June 2015:
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I don't read this kind of story much, so I have to do a little bit of suspension of disbelief. That being said, however, I think that you did a good job with this story.

I think it's sad that both Hermione and Draco act so aggressively, and that their anger expresses itself in violence. In this scenario I don't think they are at all good for each other, but I can see how the tension interacts with attraction. I kind of expected them to start making out at any point during the fight.

I think the fact that you kept them from having sexual contact really worked for this story, because the tension was already there and you denied them a release for it. It also made the refrain from fighting and the emotional intimacy at the end more powerful.

Well done.


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Review #2, by HeyMrsPotter I Love the Way You Lie

20th June 2015:

Side note, that banner is BEAUTIFUL.

Good Lord, can those two not just accept that they are meant to be and that they love each other and just be together?! Though I have to admit I thoroughly enjoyed the slapping ;) I love love LOVE the relationship you have between them here, his utter frustration with her, her determination to not let him bother her and to get under his skin as much as she can, and the blatant sexual tension that just leaps out of the screen at the reader. Part of me wanted to very irrationally shout at the screen JUST SNOG ALREADY! But I like that they didn't because it leaves the reader guessing as to what has already happened or what will happen between them in that sense. Very clever!

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Review #3, by alicia and anne I Love the Way You Lie

16th March 2013:
I listened to the song love the way you lie whilst reading this, it felt fitting to do so :D
The story was fantastically written, I loved that they were fighting and yelling at each other. You described it all so wonderfully, I could imagine it all playing out in my head, I reckon they would have been like that if they ever got together, or if they were Head boy and Head girl together.
That was really amazing!

Author's Response: I love this song for Draco and Hermione. I love it more for Harry and Theo (and for Simon and Tamara). But it fits these two quite well.

Thank you so much for leaving a review!


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Review #4, by adluvshp I Love the Way You Lie

22nd January 2013:
Hey there!

This was a fun little one-shot to read xD I love a random Dramione once in a while, and since I wanted to get you one step closer to 750 reviews, I decided to do it with this!

I liked this short piece - the way you showed their interactions in segments. Somehow, I could feel the chemistry and tension boiling at the surface.

Your writing style was good and I loved how you captured Draco and Hermione. The little fight snippets were awesome and I could honestly live my life just reading suck kind of scenes!

The ending was the most wicked of all, and I really chuckled when I read it. This one-shot said so much in such few words!

The over all pace, flow, structure, plot, and grammar was fine. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this!! Great work, Sam =)


P.S. I love the title of the one-shot too. Again, it says so much ;)

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Review #5, by deathlyhallowsmaster24 I Love the Way You Lie

18th October 2011:
Nice! I have a question though. Is this song to be based a LITTLE bit on the song, Love the Way You Lie, by Jennifer Lopez???
10/10 once again good job! *cLaPpInG*

Author's Response: The song is I Love the Way You Lie by Eminem and Rihanna. :)

Thank you for reviewing!

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Review #6, by Evermore I Love the Way You Lie

15th July 2011:
I usually cannot stand one shots but this was done so brilliantly. Excellent,great job. Do you think you could do one for the song hate me by blue October for Draco and Hermione? I'd love it sooo much

Author's Response: Thank you! I'll listen to the song. Look out for it. ;)

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Review #7, by Sweets-Caandy I Love the Way You Lie

18th April 2011:
That was really...well, not nice, because it isn't nice that they fight, but nice in a way, because they know that they like each other but just don't want to confess it...
Really nice done!

Author's Response: Thank you :)

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Review #8, by Dark Whisper I Love the Way You Lie

17th April 2011:

Wow! That was intense! I really liked it... and I loved that they fight... yes! Bring out the fight in both of them!

Very good job at being intense. I only wish there were more... like the making up... Hahahahahah!

What a great read!

Great job! 10/10 for Intensity!

Dark Whisper

Author's Response: Thank you!

This is actually going to be a soon as I start writing the next part lol.

If you like intense, you should go read Takin' Back My Love. :D

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