Aw! That was so beautiful! Great job!Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked it. ^_^ Report Review
Congratulations on completing my challenge! Your story was very interesting. I liked how you used Rose's thoughts to convey the feeling of the story instead of dialog. It was very clear how torn Rose felt between her family and Scorpius. One place I really would have liked to see dialog would have been them actually saying "I love you" to each other. Overall it was a great read and I enjoyed it!Author's Response: I have to admit, it was a very difficult one for me to write. I don't usually try to write romance in that way, even tragic romance, so I feel I could probably improve it.
It was my intent that the last part was actually spoken dialog and it's just his reply that isn't communicated. I'll try and make it clearer. ^^
I'm glad you enjoyed it though. It was certainly a challenge and I enjoyed trying it out. :] Report Review
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