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5 Reviews Found

Review #1, by anonymous Leaving the Lovegoods

20th June 2011:
What an utterly darling chapter. I think a lovely way for them to start.

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Review #2, by annyomous Bad News for Breakfast

3rd June 2011:
I am enjoying this story immensely and am always cheered when I find I have a new chapter to enjoy in the evening. I adore the friendship/relationship you have built, it is very convincing. I think the depth you have added under the whimsy of Luna is also very nice.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review. I really appreciate it. Luna has been the character I've had the most fun attempting to write so far. I hope I haven't strayed too far from what people expect of her.

Thank you again.


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Review #3, by magicmuggle01 Strange on a Train

25th May 2011:
Someone should tell Malfoy that the truth hurts. Another good chapter and 10/10. Now for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review.

I'd love to try and write Malfoy from his own perspective but I don't think I would be able to see past the nasty, spiteful side. It would be a good challange nonetheless.

Thank you again.


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Review #4, by hpfan Jeers, Sneers and Butterbeers

24th May 2011:
This is an incredible story, and I don't understand why you don't have more reviews. It's fresh and original, and I love the characters you've invented as well. I think the Seymour/Luna relationship is very believable in how you've built it up, and I can't wait to read your next installment.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm always happy when I see another review. I'm really glad you like the OCs, I really enjoyed writing the moments when it was just Seymour, Robin, Alice and Lloyd together.

I really hope you enjoy the rest of the story.


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Review #5, by magicmuggle01 An Introduction to the Wild and Weird Side of Wizardry.

15th May 2011:
Though it took me two reads (half yesterday and the other half today) I found the start of this chapter to be very good (I know how differcult it can be to get the first chapter just right. If you don't grab the persons attention with this chapter you've lost them). I like the sound of this Seymore character. I give you 10/10 and may I make a suggestion? Keep your chapters down to 2000-3000 words. Some people can find it a bit tiresome with such a long chapter. I'll read the next chapter later, got one or two things needing done. I have added you to favs so that I can find it later.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I really appreciate the pointers and I will take them into account. I always worry that some of my chapters are too long. I think one of the longest is about 9000 so I might try breaking that into two chapters instead.

Thanks again.


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