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Review #1, by laney lou Prologue: the wherefore.

15th May 2011:
Well, that explained absoultly nothing about the story whatsoever. I don't know about everyone else,but I feel more confused than I feel intersted. Although I will probably will read the next chapter, I would have liked it if you intrudused a few characters and something happened. This chapter was bascilly someone rambling about being young and old and about going on to the tale. I think this story has some potentail, but needs to be a little more explainetory.

Author's Response: You are absolutely right, this is a very rambly beginning and I should have updated it earlier. My bad, I shall attempt to get on it straight away!

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