Aww this was good... Sad... but good...Author's Response: Thank you :) I really tried to make it tragic, but beauitful and enlightening and sort of hopeful. Thanks so much for reviewing! Report Review
I can only think of one word after that, Beautiful.
tgfoyAuthor's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so honored :) Thank you for reading and reviewing and I'm glad you liked it Report Review
Hello! It's TenthWeasleyWriter, popping over to leave you a review for your entry in my challenge. :D
I really liked the angle you took on this quote - and what's really fun is, in assigning this quote I had something totally different in mind (I only assigned quotes I could picture myself working with, as well), but your way worked so well! The emotions were raw and powerful - they really hit me hard, and I actually FELT them in reading them, which was very impressive. Not all authors can do that. Your characterization of Harry was very good, as well, and I often feel that because we saw so much of Harry in the books people often have a large chance of messing up his character. Yours was a very nice characterization. :D
Overall, I really enjoyed reading your entry! Thank you very much for entering, and I hope you had as much fun as I did reading it. :)Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so honored that you liked it and thought it was written well. I tend to stay away from the trio for fear of messing them up so it means a lot to me that you thought I captured Harry! Thank you for your challenge and I'm so glad you enjoyed my entry! Report Review
This story pulled at my heartstrings, it did. (Woah, sorry to go all Yoda on you. xD) But on a serious note, great one-shot. I felt like crying.
A talented writer you are. :PAuthor's Response: Thank you so much! I'm totally honored that you think I'm talented! I just wanted to make this as realistic as possible...as close to the truth as I could ascertain. Thanks so much for reading and writing! Report Review
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