I love this story! I can't believe I haven't seen it till now. I think you wrote Ron perfectly, I always thought he would second guess things like this. Update please!!! Even though you haven't in a year.

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Aww, this is a lovely story. Keep updating! 10/10.

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Hey there! (Finally, sorry for taking so long! I meant to get to these as soon as the challenge ended, but it sure has been a busy... month! *hides*) Anyways, this was a lovely chapter and I look forward to reading more of it! I really liked how much we saw of the characters even in just the first chapter and I'm excited to continue. :)
Annie

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Very nice beginning - clear, crisp writing and I love the whole idea of the story. Looking forward to reading more!

Author's Response: Thank you!:)

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Another wonderful chapter, glad you updated! :) It's sort of refreshing to see someone explore the issue of cold feet, since so many of us (me included, I'll admit) often write whirlwind happily-ever-after romances. Great work!

Author's Response: Aww, thanks! :D It'll end nicely, though :)

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Ah, this chapter was good, can't wait 4 more!

Author's Response: I'm glad that you liked it :D Thanks for reviewing :)

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This is good! Could u please put up some more? Thanx ;)

Author's Response: There'll be a few more chapters, thanks for reviewing!

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