I like how you write. Perhaps not the story itself, but how you make it sound. So beautiful and mesmerizing. It might have something to do with it being originally written in Portuguese? I don't know.

The only thing I have to say is that I feel that you could have gone deeper into it. As in, explore the camera metaphor some more, for example. I do kind of like that you didn't dwell on their past history for long, jut a quick comment here and there.

Author's Response: Thank you for all the compliments, I'm happy to know that you like my writing style!
The story is very simple and I wanted it that way. What I did was picking something ordinary, like a camera, and transform it into something bigger, something much more meaningful. And I think I did a good job with that.
Well, I'm really, really happy to know you liked it that much and that has definitely to do with the fact that I feel much more confortable writing a story in my mother language and then translate it to English, like I did.
During the translation I did my best to try and keep the "magic" of my writing and the story itself.

You're probably right, but as I said I wanted it to be very simple, but I understand your point of view.
Thank you, once more.

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I absolutely love it!!! It is so cute =D
And, I have to say, you have a very awesome beta ;D

Author's Response: Aww, thanks Ams! :D
Hahahaha, and modesty is your middle name, right? :P
But anyway, thank you so much for betaing this for me, dear! :)

Love,
Catairly

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The last two paragraphs are very powerful, and you can visualise the two together.

Very nice, indeed.

Author's Response: Thank you very much!! I'm really happy to know you enjoyed it and that you could picture the scenes as I described them!
Thank you, once again! :)

Love,
Catairly

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This is lovely.
You managed to take a simple idea and turn it into a masterpiece! It's things like this that prove writing is one of the most detailed and secretly beautiful forms of art.
(And you've now got a stalker, by the way. Congrats.)

Author's Response: Thank you so much!! I'm so happy that you liked the story, the concept... Well, everything really! All of your compliments made me blush, hahaha! xD And especially since English isn't my 1st language it means a lot to me to read all of the things you wrote on your review!!
(Hahahaha, I think that won't be a bad thing xD)
Once again, thank you for your wonderful review!

Love,
Catairly

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