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Review #1, by jenna A Revelation

17th May 2011:
Please another chapter i loved it who would criticise!

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Review #2, by Miss Haggan A Revelation

6th May 2011:
Awk I liked it. There were a few spelling errors especially in the first few paragraphs, but generally it was a very good story.

If you thought of doing another chapter then maybe you could write it as Hermione's POV, and what way she sees Harry.

Just and idea but you're the Author so it's totally up to you. ;)

So 9/10 from me on a very good story.

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