Please another chapter i loved it who would criticise! Report Review
Awk I liked it. There were a few spelling errors especially in the first few paragraphs, but generally it was a very good story. If you thought of doing another chapter then maybe you could write it as Hermione's POV, and what way she sees Harry. Just and idea but you're the Author so it's totally up to you. ;) So 9/10 from me on a very good story. Report Review
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