You're still going strong :D I think the plot is really interesting here. I can honestly say that I've never seen one like it. And you seem to be staying far away from cliches, which is always good.
Once again, I have to gush about your imagery. Especially in the first part of this, you have such beautiful descriptions. It set the scene for me, and it gives me an insight into Adele as well, because it tells me what she notices. Along with all the minor details, like the stiff front gate. They really make the story.
One thing on this is the spacing, though. If you add a space between dialogue, it just makes it way easier to read. Right now, the dialogue is just in one big blob XD
Overall though, I love it! Awesome job!
-NaidatheRavenclaw, Ravenclaw Report Review
I can't believe this has no reviews! It's such a good story!
Especially with your descriptions. They're absolutely gorgeous. I think I got the best sense of that during the flashback. Your imagery there set the scene, and you followed that up with great plot. You really write romance well, too. I could practically feel the passion in the words. And the plot pulled me in, so that I can't wait to read on!
Adele seems to be a really interesting character. I like her name, first off :) It's pretty. It seems as though she has a good backstory, and her actions are definitely revealing a lot about her character! A lot of author's struggle with character development, but you're not, so great job on that!
Honestly, great job on this!
-NaidatheRavenclaw, RavenclawAuthor's Response: Oh my god!! Gah I am so shocked I have a review! :) haha seriously. I've been so busy lately too so thankyou very very much for reviewing. I hope you get to read this. It means the world to me. Wow, the feedback is amazing. Ah the dialogue, thankyou for bringing that up! Right, needs spacing more? Got it. I'll try with that, thank you very much. I do romance well? WOOHO. That's my aim xD haah. You may not realise this but you have just given me the inspiration and good shove I needed to carry this on. Honestly, I havn't been very motivated recently. When I started this I was like I LOVE Adele, she feels like a part of me, I KNOW her but now. I feel a little lost. I'm going to try again. Bear with me please, keep a look out or whatever on this story. There will be a next chapter I swear. :)
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