{reviewid: 2747410, reviewer: 'Asdfghjkl'}
21st October 2012:
The characters are too OOC for me, specially Draco. I don't think he'd call Harry and Ron by their first names. And he's also teaching a bunch of Muggles, when he has tons of money at his disposal and he could have taught wizarding children.
Author's Response: Thank you for the CC.
Jasmine, x
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{reviewid: 2747404, reviewer: 'Asdfghjkl'}
21st October 2012:
This was a great chapter and your writing is above most on this site. The only problem I noticed was the article you wrote about Hermione. It wasn't professional enough for a newspaper article. I never used to notice these things before, or care for that matter, but I'm taking journalism this year and it's sort of given me insight on what a newspaper article should look like, what you should and shouldn't do, and how to write one.
Author's Response: Yeah, well, I'm not a journalist so that's why haha.
And my writing is so not above the rest on this site, but thank you!
Jasmine, x
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{reviewid: 2739041, reviewer: 'LivingInTheMalfoyManner'}
11th September 2012:
I this is incredably adorable, I love it so much.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it :D
Jasmine, x
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{reviewid: 2729317, reviewer: 'HPluvergirl'}
8th August 2012:
Hand over the tissues! Such a fabulous story! Loved it!
Author's Response: Thank you!
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{reviewid: 2729316, reviewer: 'HPluvergirl'}
8th August 2012:
Happy ending. Run is a very very inappropriate word, so is Lavender.
Author's Response: Thank you!
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{reviewid: 2729313, reviewer: 'HPluvergirl'}
8th August 2012:
NO!!! *I scream in an overly dramatic scream* Why?
Author's Response: BECAUSE I'M EVIL!
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{reviewid: 2729304, reviewer: 'HPluvergirl'}
8th August 2012:
Ugh! Stupid Ron always has to ruin everything!
Author's Response: In this story, yes, yes, he does :)
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{reviewid: 2729299, reviewer: 'HPluvergirl'}
8th August 2012:
No! I will stand in the way of Dorian with my super mind power!
Author's Response: YOU STAND IN HIS WAY! DORIAN IS EVIL & NEEDS TO BE DESTROYED!
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{reviewid: 2729296, reviewer: 'HPluvergirl'}
8th August 2012:
WHAT?!?! RON JUST MADE THE BIGGEST (and funniest) MISTAKE OF HIS LIFE! LAVENDER IS GOING TO MAKE HIM RUE THAT!
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying my story!
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{reviewid: 2729289, reviewer: 'HPluvergirl'}
8th August 2012:
Hmm. This chapter gave me a lot to think about. Love it though!
Author's Response: I'm glad it did :D Thank you!
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{reviewid: 2729286, reviewer: 'HPluvergirl'}
8th August 2012:
Love it! Perfect! 10/10
Author's Response: Thank you!
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{reviewid: 2729279, reviewer: 'HPluvergirl'}
8th August 2012:
:O What the…? Who's Dorian really? I bet his mission is to kill Hermione! Love it though!
Author's Response: You'll find out very soon. Thank you!
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{reviewid: 2729277, reviewer: 'HPluvergirl'}
8th August 2012:
Okay, Draco is fine, and I'm good. Love it! 10/10!
Author's Response: Thank you!
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{reviewid: 2729275, reviewer: 'HPluvergirl'}
8th August 2012:
Omigod! Draco is okay right? If he's not, I will be very sad.
Author's Response: Draco will be alright, don't worry!
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{reviewid: 2729271, reviewer: 'HPluvergirl'}
8th August 2012:
Love it! Couldn't stop laughing when Draco beat the crap out of McLaggen!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it
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{reviewid: 2729266, reviewer: 'HPluvergirl'}
8th August 2012:
So Ron isn't dead or hurt. Good I guess. Love it!!
Author's Response: Thank you!
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{reviewid: 2729264, reviewer: 'HPluvergirl'}
8th August 2012:
I bet he's Fenrir Greyback or Voldemort in disguise. But love it!
Author's Response: WRONG! Good guess though :P Thank you!
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{reviewid: 2729261, reviewer: 'HPluvergirl'}
8th August 2012:
Why isn't Ron there? *shakes away bad thoughts of what happened to Ron*
Author's Response: Ron will come in later, don't worry!
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{reviewid: 2729237, reviewer: 'HPluvergirl'}
8th August 2012:
Omigod!!! Love it!!!
Author's Response: Thank you!
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{reviewid: 2729233, reviewer: 'HPluvergirl'}
8th August 2012:
Love it! Utterly amazing!
Author's Response: Thank you!
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{reviewid: 2708976, reviewer: 'None'}
16th June 2012:
You have some editing to do on this chapter but overall the content is very good.
Author's Response: Oh, don't worry I know! Haha, I'm just too lazy to edit it (that I can't edit my own stories to save my life :P) Thank you!
Jas, x
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{reviewid: 2707308, reviewer: 'Allyce'}
11th June 2012:
I liked this story :). It had a little bit of everything, and it was well written. I think that things happened too quickly, but then again, it's your fanfiction, not mine.
10/10
Author's Response: Thank you! Honestly, I'm not overly happy with this story either but I'm too lazy to go back and edit it. The main thing is that I learned from this story and I won't make the same mistakes again. Thank you!
Jas, x
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{reviewid: 2679948, reviewer: 'griffindorechicky101'}
1st April 2012:
i cant belive it is over i loved it i miss it already
Author's Response: I can't believe it's over either! Thank you!
Jas
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{reviewid: 2679742, reviewer: 'Scriptie'}
1st April 2012:
Perfect ending!! Finish your Doctor Who ones xDD Lol. Fantastic work :)
-Scriptie
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm trying to finish them; crossovers become progrssively harder to write as times moves on
Jas
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{reviewid: 2679740, reviewer: 'Scriptie'}
1st April 2012:
Soo sudden, but soo perfect. What was Dorian anyways? I'm curious...xD
-Scriptie
Author's Response: Yeah it was sudden wasn't it? I think I might go back and edit it. Dorian was a wizard killer.
Jas
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