Update soon! I really love this! It rox!

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Great.. will there be an update?

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This is really good

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lol spacing!!

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um i dont want to be rude but can i give a suggestion? this is really good but it a bit confusing to read, maybe if you put more spaces in it would be easier to read

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nice start

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Cool story! I really like it...hope you keep it up!

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write!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Write, ive been waiting for almost 3 weeks. Im fixing on not reading it anymore!!!!!!!!!

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coool story! write more!

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i like where this is going, it\'s orginal but doesn\'t seem all that new(i mean that as a good thing) keep up the good work

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your fic is the first one i read thats well in this style very original ^ ^ i like it

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This is great! Please continue it!! I love it!! *~LT. Dan~* ~Alexa~ ;)

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hey, very interesting idea! I like where you are going with this!! Keep it up, this story is great!

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since i'm not a big harry potter fan i've got to say i really like this story, even if it is harry potter, jen you have just made it so that you will be helping me with all my writing!!! and btw your a really good writer and don't let anyone tell you different. ~*Jessica*~

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wonderful story!!! i really liked it you have to post more!!! please, asap! thanx buh bye

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Good story, the idea of gryfflin was good, and having jennifer be unwillingly a death eater, this ensures a good story, there are a few minor errors, like spelling, but thats a big problem for all writers. I hope you post the next chapter asap, Travis

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i really enjoyied reading your story, i can't wait for the next chapter, you really should write more, well i'm off, i'll check by later for an update

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OoOoO i really like your story, it's new and imaginative, i hop you get the next chapter up asap, and by the way please make hermione and ron stay together this time!!!

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I see you got the next chapter up! congrats! you still seem to be rushing into things, slow down and take your time, let the plot thicken, and try to end off in a cliffhanger somethings it keeps interest in the story, and BTW I trust that be nice to snape?

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hey this stoies cool so keep writing^_^

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I think it's ok for the 1st chapter but it doesn't really explain who is talking. What i mean is i was reading it and i was like who is talking is it draco or the girl. if u were more explanatory you would make a decen writer. xxxxxxxxxx

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hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

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first and foremost i'd like to thank you for reviewing my story, i will really try and take that to heart, you too are a very good writier, i have added you on to my contacts list so we may talk, but what about? thats beside the point, i personal hope the next chapter is put up asap, two suggestions, there seems to be a LOT of seual tension in this story, you will get reviews saying you have a to low rating from those who are easily queazy, and second, spelling seems to be a small problem, like you told me, you should reread your finished producg before you post it.

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I agree with Grumblebump ... you have an interesting way of writing ... Not saying its bad!! It's cool to read different styles. Hope you can read my stories if you have time .. Obsession and Forbidden Feelings ...

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Neat! Seventh chapter of my fic is coming up...as Grumblehump told me with my fic...GOOD original characters are few and far between. I think this is one of the "few and far between" kind

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