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Review #1, by Timechild Finally

15th April 2011:
Good one-shot. Nice detail and pacing. I like how Ginny is nervous the whole time.

The conversation with the sorting hat was nicely done. Ginny's worries about the sorting were told well. I also like how the hat talked to Ginny and said about the other houses.

I am a little bit surprised that Harry and Ron did not show up at the end there. It's alright, I was just surprised that's all.

Good job all in all.

Author's Response: Thank you! I adore Ginny, so I'm glad you found it to be in character for her:) I didn't have Harry and Ron show up because, though they may have seen her sorted, she didn't really see them. Thanks for the review!

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Review #2, by thewhiteking Finally

15th April 2011:
Lovely. Good characterisation, strong dialogue, really liked the sorting hat. Very enjoyable.

Author's Response: Thank you! Usually dialogue is my downfall because it gets to be stilted or cheesy, so I'm glad this was enjoyable for you:)

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