Good one-shot. Nice detail and pacing. I like how Ginny is nervous the whole time.
The conversation with the sorting hat was nicely done. Ginny's worries about the sorting were told well. I also like how the hat talked to Ginny and said about the other houses.
I am a little bit surprised that Harry and Ron did not show up at the end there. It's alright, I was just surprised that's all.
Good job all in all.Author's Response: Thank you! I adore Ginny, so I'm glad you found it to be in character for her:) I didn't have Harry and Ron show up because, though they may have seen her sorted, she didn't really see them. Thanks for the review! Report Review
Lovely. Good characterisation, strong dialogue, really liked the sorting hat. Very enjoyable.Author's Response: Thank you! Usually dialogue is my downfall because it gets to be stilted or cheesy, so I'm glad this was enjoyable for you:) Report Review
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