3 Reviews Found

Review #1, by wenderbender Chapter One

15th May 2011:
Wow one chapter and I'm already hooked! I love that you're working backwards from the conclusion. Can't wait to find out what happens next.

Author's Response: Thank you. :) I'm glad that you are enjoying it and thanks for taking time to review! --Jenna

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Review #2, by Nynfadora Chapter One

26th April 2011:
Hello! :D

So, I think from a Twitter thing awhile back…or maybe it was just a few weeks…that there were suggestions for detective shows; guessing this is the product of it? :)

(^Errr…. That was a bit pointless, sorry :S)
So, anywhos, Charles is epic in this! He’s got this really edgy, classic detective character, and I already love him as an OC! His character alone, makes this a definite detective fic, and the way it’s played out feels like a game of Cluedo…just without the guessing of the rooms, or the murder weapons. ;)

I like how the murderer has already been identified too, its different, however I’m not sure whether it’ll all change or not, which is why this is already building up to be a great fic!

The characters, as always with your fics, are realistic, and you can tell just from their replies how they’re under pressure, plus how they deal with it, given their individual personalities.

So, yeah, loving this so far! You’ve already got the suspense going, and I love detective programs on the box, but there isn’t many fics out there similar, so this is amazing!

10/10, epic as ever :)

Author's Response: Actually it was for another story I'm working on. :P This one was inspired by Murder, She Wrote actually. Which is a really old show, don't know if you've heard of it before. :)

Thank you so much for that! My first time creating an OC completely from scratch so I've been really nervous about his realism.

It's called a Whydunit. Rather than the classic Whodunit detective movie/books. I like to think if this was on TV, it would be in black and white. :)

Thank you so much for taking time to come by and read and review. :D --Jenna

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Review #3, by TheHeirOfSlytherin Chapter One

15th April 2011:
I'm so excited! I love classic murder mystery types and this is perfect! Charles is definitely the best character, in my opinion. He's so nonchalant and cool. I really can't wait for the next chapter!!!


Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad that you like him. He's actually the first time I've ever used an OC as a main character, so I'm really worried on him. :) --Jenna

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