Haha awesome chapter. I had fun reading this!! Great work! Please keep writing!
ADAuthor's Response: Thank you, glad you're enjoying! Hope to update soon! Report Review
Hhaha this is great please update! Report Review
Please update!! Awesome story! Report Review
You should continue the story, I find it hilarious. Keep up the good work ! Report Review
I really love this story. I'm not sure to think of it as a parody/mockumentary or just a humor fic, but each chapter's cracking me up and makes me want to read more.
Keep up the good work. 10/10 & favorite.Author's Response: I think parody/mockumentary/humour fic would be accurate! Thanks much for the review & the favorite, more to come soon! Report Review
Woah, now that was some shock. I am looking forward to see how things turn up now!
You sure know how to do your plot twists!
I liked this chapter better than the previous ones, Harry, Ron, Ginny seemed much more in-character.
Also, your writing has improved. I am loving the concept of the story. The plot idea is awesome!! =D
I wonder how things will turn out next! Voldemort and good, woah, that is going to be impossible. But I guess being 11-year-old does change everything!! The story seems cool so far and I am waiting for the next chapter now!! Do update soon! Great going there!
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House: SlytherinAuthor's Response: Wow! Thanks for the review I appreciate it! Glad you're enjoying it, working on the next chapter soon just you wait for some surprises! Report Review
hey! wow this is a fun story, great going!Author's Response: Cheers! :) thanks much. Report Review
I like it. Especially the first bit with little Voldy, seems he might have a heart this time around:P. I'm not so sure I'm a hundred percent on the g-weed, but hey could add for some interesting drama/action later on lol. Report Review
Voldemort just amuse me. Keep up the awesome story. LoL Report Review
This is absoloutly fricken brilliant! Hahaha, had me smiling the whole way through...I was Reading this in a train and just casually burst out laughing and people must have thought..I was weird.. Hahaha next chapter up soon please? :DAuthor's Response: Thank you :) I'm glad I got a laugh out of you, Im in the process of working on the next one! Report Review
hahahaha this is gold. I love their arguments and your little voldy!Author's Response: Thankya :D it's a blast writing it, thanks for reviewing! Report Review
good chapter, will be interesting what happens back at school Report Review
Y e e e e s s s s s s s s s s s s s s s. I love it! Report Review
Ahaha this is awesome Case! I have the AVPM voices in my head when I read it. Totally can't wait to see what happens. Also, awesome plot to take down Harry by killing ron. Do you not like Ron? LolAuthor's Response: My response didn't go through on this last time lol but yes I love ron he's just the unfortunate victim of my evil plotting bwahaha what do you think about that moonshoes?? Report Review
I think the plot to the story is a very good one, but the way you represent Voldemort is so unbelievable, I fear if you continue with him acting so out of character(I know he is in a childs body, but still) the story will not be very good. Voldemort is evil, does not cry, and certainly would have taken someone else's wand and hexed them all.Author's Response: I appreciate your comments and I will take them into consideration. This voldemort is not meant to be like the scary villian that he is in all the other stories as this story is going to be a comedy. If you're interested enough keep reading as I update and I think his character will make more sense! Report Review
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