2 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Akussa The Presage Projector

22nd May 2011:
What an interesting idea. I really like this story; reminded me a bit of 1984 I think.

I loved the narrative of this story, almost poetic, flows through the story perfectly. Also, I didn't notice any selling errors so, great job, that also helped keep the flow and ease of your story.

Overall, a great, original idea, originaly written too and highly enjoyable; great job!

Akussa

Author's Response: Hey there!

Wonderful to see you back again! :3

Wow, I'm surprised and happy that you read this! It's just so long, I don't think anyone wanted to haha.

I'm so glad you thought it was reminiscent of 1984, it was certainly meant to be (love that book)!

And I'm glad you liked the originality! I think it almost scared me, because I thought people wouldn't like it (which is sort of true, no one has read this pretty much haha). But, I guess the risk paid off if the few people who have read it liked it! :D

Thank you again for your lovely review!


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Review #2, by mirasoul The Presage Projector

26th April 2011:
Wow, that was intense. There's no other word to describe it. It reminded me of 1984, kind of. The whole presage projector idea (a really brilliant one, I might add) was very Big Brother-esque. It's difficult to follow at times, but overall a good one-shot. Different from any I've ever read, which is good. It's nice to see something unique every once in a while, like a breath of fresh air. :)

Author's Response: Ah! I love this review. It was totally meant to be reminiscent of 1984 so I am SO happy you thought that!!!

And I am also really happy you thought it was intense, I was worried it would seem very flat.

I think maybe I tried to pack in too much back story so that might be what you meant about being hard to follow! I'll edit soon! :)

Thanks so much for the review! You're amazing! :)


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