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Review #1, by Ravenclawgirly07 Twilfitt and Tatting's

29th May 2011:
I'm back again :) you hit the whole sale shoppin right on the mark. You know what I just realized I sound like a bloody professional critic. Let me try this... OMG! that reminded me so much of black Friday especially the timid little worker opening the doors and hoping not to get trampled! (imagine that in a valley girl accent) anyways great story, again. I'll be wathing for the next chappie

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Review #2, by ViVi A Trip to Diagon Alley

10th April 2011:
Oh! This sounds good! I hope you continue! I like it alot so far though :-) good luck!

Author's Response: Thanks! I plan on posting the next chapter within the next couople of days :)

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Review #3, by Ravenclawgirly07 A Trip to Diagon Alley

9th April 2011:
“Victiore, do you realize what ten minutes means during a mega sale? Ten minutes is the difference between getting that blouse you’ve been eyeing all summer and getting a pair of socks the color of sausage gravy.”

WO first review ever! For a first story i think you did a really great job. That line above was probably the funniest thing ive ever heard. ok im exaggerating a little bit. ive been known to be melodramatic. anyways. i think maybe next chapter you should establish a little more background information? Keep writing!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm working on the second chapter now and I'll keep what you said about background info in mind:)

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