Sorry it's taken me ages to review but I LOVED IT!!
James writing in his diary was so funny!! Really had me laughing out loud XDAuthor's Response: Hi Crescent Moon! I missed you... honest.
I have a message from James for you though. IT WAS A JOURNAL!! Report Review
*appluse* This is a great, great chapter! I look forward to reading the next one. I love the style.
TashiAuthor's Response: Hi Tashi! Thanks a LOT girl (assuming you are a girl). 2 greats?
Ar you Indian by any chance? Report Review
Well done its a really good novel but maybe you could make it even longer?! :) Honestly I would never have known it was your first novel its really good and brilliantly written, the descriptions are perfect! Well done again and I hope to read more of your work!
Randomgirl :) xxxAuthor's Response: Hmmm randomgirl, maybe you should read You Are Not Alone. It is longer. And thanks for all the positive stuff you said. Brilliantly written !?! WHOOOPPPEEE!!! PERFECT??? YIPPPEEE!!! Report Review
Aaw , That was a well good ending (:
This story was so good , Please do some more James/Lily stories :D
JilyRonks xxAuthor's Response: Thanks JilyRonks! Cute name, btw. Oh, and I have another chapter in cue. Its quite bittersweet. Here's The summary:
Harry inherited the Potter family vault on his seventeenth birthday, but got around to looking through it after Voldemort's death. A true treasure he finds there is a letter from his mother, addressed to her unborn child. Report Review
Love this story sooo much , more chapters soon please :)
JilyRonks xAuthor's Response: Okay JilyRonks! Right now I have chapter for a story named No Need To Say Goodbye, which is my pet story and my dream. I had to specifically change it to suit the site, and so...
The next chapter for OUASB is next! Report Review
Please continue soon!! Love this story XDAuthor's Response: Hi Cresent Moon!!
Love the story? Yipppeee!!! Report Review
Ooh, I've never read a story like this before! I must find out what happens! And I truely love the writing.
TashiAuthor's Response: Please do! The next chapter is up. And thanks for the review and the uniqueness vote.
Astha. Report Review
plz write more it looks good so far!Author's Response: okey dokey robinhayden Report Review
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